Nightmare's End (Short Demo)

[TheDavenia]

Nightmare's End (Short Demo)
Hey guys,
this is my new custom story, Nightmare's End!
Please know that there's still many things to do to the custom story.
Like detailing the map more and adding sounds and music!
But anyways enjoy!

http://www.mediafire.com/?byj8of9phdt818p

[Obliviator27]

Downloaded, and am going to play right away. I've got this window open, so I can write my thoughts as I go along through this mod.

Spoiler below!

- I understand that this mod needs more work, but I'll give suggestions nonetheless!
- I'd recommend some sort of intro, as opposed to be dropped right into the map.
- Statue movement. Creepy.
- BAD ANGEL, BAD
- Ending is slightly cliche
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Well, when you said short, you meant short. Some improvements could be made, of course, but you're working on that. Keep it up.

[TheDavenia]

(11-05-2011 08:39 PM)Obliviator27 Wrote:  Downloaded, and am going to play right away. I've got this window open, so I can write my thoughts as I go along through this mod.

Spoiler below!

- I understand that this mod needs more work, but I'll give suggestions nonetheless!
- I'd recommend some sort of intro, as opposed to be dropped right into the map.
- Statue movement. Creepy.
- BAD ANGEL, BAD
- Ending is slightly cliche
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Well, when you said short, you meant short. Some improvements could be made, of course, but you're working on that. Keep it up.

Thanks man, i appreciate it!

[Lontasm]

(11-05-2011 08:39 PM)Obliviator27 Wrote:  Downloaded, and am going to play right away. I've got this window open, so I can write my thoughts as I go along through this mod.

Spoiler below!

- I understand that this mod needs more work, but I'll give suggestions nonetheless!
- I'd recommend some sort of intro, as opposed to be dropped right into the map.
- Statue movement. Creepy.
- BAD ANGEL, BAD
- Ending is slightly cliche
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Well, when you said short, you meant short. Some improvements could be made, of course, but you're working on that. Keep it up.

We've been working on improvement for the current part several hours now, and the intro have had much improvements already

[Prelauncher]

The demo was cool, man. Good job. Looking forward to see the improved version

[TheDavenia]

(11-05-2011 11:32 PM)Prelauncher Wrote:  The demo was cool, man. Good job. Looking forward to see the improved version

Thanks man

[LawlPie]

Here is my playthrough:

[TheDavenia]

(11-06-2011 03:52 PM)LawlPie Wrote:  Here is my playthrough:

Thanks, again

[vcplz]

I liked it, but I think you should use box lights. aaaaaannnnnnnddddd I can't really say more because you made a very short demo, so there isn't much that I tell you.

[TheDavenia]

(11-08-2011 12:46 AM)vcplz Wrote:  I liked it, but I think you should use box lights. aaaaaannnnnnnddddd I can't really say more because you made a very short demo, so there isn't much that I tell you.

Yeah i know, there box lights and awesome lights in the bedroom now + were releasing a longer demo later today or tomorrow