Awakening to Shattered Life v1.3

[Revis1985]

Well Np man... would you please make one ^^ for all of us that likes puzzles and not to many monsters XD

[HumiliatioN]

(12-28-2011 07:56 PM)Revis1985 Wrote:  Well Np man... would you please make one ^^ for all of us that likes puzzles and not to many monsters XD

I have my next project coming, but really SLOW I mean Sloooowww... I don't know my next ideas yet, I only have 1 map ready.. Out of ideas now.. and not much time now. Spending with HPL2 editor program

But I will make it ready. Not now. Not soon.

[MrCookieh]

Hey, I played your custom story, and it was quite nice!

Story wasn't that original, but I think it's hard to come up with a good original story these days

Spoiler below!

After reading the note in William's office, it says, that it had no capital letters etc. but the note HAD this stuff.

I had really problems finding that lever:

Spoiler below!

it was hardly visible in the shelf, you probably should put it further below

Spoiler below!

What's the orb for? I finished the custom story with 1 piece at the altar, and the rest of the pieces in my inventory. Do you need it when you choose to sacrifice William?

Spoiler below!

I REALLY loved these 'self-made' monsters in the dungeon area! They had a really creepy look, although the kitchen knife looked a bit odd (but you shouldn't trigger it so often, after the first two, it wasn't that scary anymore

I've enjoyed it!

[HumiliatioN]

(12-29-2011 02:58 PM)MrCookieh Wrote:  Hey, I played your custom story, and it was quite nice!

Story wasn't that original, but I think it's hard to come up with a good original story these days

Humiliation: Yes I know, really hard.

Spoiler below!

After reading the note in William's office, it says, that it had no capital letters etc. but the note HAD this stuff.

Ups. My mistake.

I had really problems finding that lever:

Spoiler below!

it was hardly visible in the shelf, you probably should put it further below

Maybe, but I want some challenge in that puzzle and little frustration included too

Spoiler below!

What's the orb for? I finished the custom story with 1 piece at the altar, and the rest of the pieces in my inventory. Do you need it when you choose to sacrifice William?

Nope. Sacrifide choice doesn't need any orbs. Only Traitor needs, then you have finish that "6 orb altar Quest" and escape from the dungeon.

Spoiler below!

I REALLY loved these 'self-made' monsters in the dungeon area! They had a really creepy look, although the kitchen knife looked a bit odd (but you shouldn't trigger it so often, after the first two, it wasn't that scary anymore

I know, I get exited and making those little more.

I've enjoyed it!

Thanks for your feedback I'm really happy if this was good CS for you

[Xss]

Completely forgot to put vids! Here is part 7

[Elven]

[RingMany]

I have played a lot of Custom Stories on Amnesia, and all I can say is... This is the best one I have ever played! It was fantastic!

I was thoroughly enjoying myself throughout the whole story, was scared at nearly every moment, not knowing what would happen, unlike other custom maps I have played, where it has cheap jumps and scares, this story make me terrified the whole time, through the atmosphere, and unpredictable events, and completely nailed it!

The detail and design of all the rooms are brilliant, everything is to scale. The story line was also very good, and actually made sense, including the notes. A lot of custom maps in the past, the stories seemed rushed, and did not make any sense to me, no matter how hard I tried.

There was no bugs or problems at all in the game. The map took me around 1 hour 30 minutes to complete, which is great. Having a very detailed and brilliant map, and not being incredibly short.

Some of the puzzles took me a little while to figure out, and I nearly gave up at one point, as I had never seen anything like them before. When I finally solved the puzzle, I got a very satisfying feeling of joy, and accomplishment, rather than "Omg that was way to hard, took forever..."

Overall, I thought this was an amazing custom story, and you clearly spent a long time creating this, and I would recommend it to all Amnesia player. I really hope you keep the good maps coming. You have even inspired me to create my own Custom Story. Although I doubt it will be as awesome as this.

Thanks again for the map, and the chills down my spine. 5/5

[HumiliatioN]

(04-12-2012 08:45 PM)RingMany Wrote:  I have played a lot of Custom Stories on Amnesia, and all I can say is... This is the best one I have ever played! It was fantastic!

I was thoroughly enjoying myself throughout the whole story, was scared at nearly every moment, not knowing what would happen, unlike other custom maps I have played, where it has cheap jumps and scares, this story make me terrified the whole time, through the atmosphere, and unpredictable events, and completely nailed it!

The detail and design of all the rooms are brilliant, everything is to scale. The story line was also very good, and actually made sense, including the notes. A lot of custom maps in the past, the stories seemed rushed, and did not make any sense to me, no matter how hard I tried.

There was no bugs or problems at all in the game. The map took me around 1 hour 30 minutes to complete, which is great. Having a very detailed and brilliant map, and not being incredibly short.

Some of the puzzles took me a little while to figure out, and I nearly gave up at one point, as I had never seen anything like them before. When I finally solved the puzzle, I got a very satisfying feeling of joy, and accomplishment, rather than "Omg that was way to hard, took forever..."

Overall, I thought this was an amazing custom story, and you clearly spent a long time creating this, and I would recommend it to all Amnesia player. I really hope you keep the good maps coming. You have even inspired me to create my own Custom Story. Although I doubt it will be as awesome as this.

Thanks again for the map, and the chills down my spine. 5/5

Wow, thanks man for this very awesome feedback

[jessehmusic]

(08-16-2011 12:11 AM)HumiliatioN Wrote:  Hello there again my Good Frictional Games Community.

HumiliatioN Productions Presents to you:

" Awakening to Shattered Life "

HumiliatioN have already another serious project going on and this time I'll take time with this project and trying to make beautiful, atmospheric, scary as hell.

Now I have started this slowly but anyway making something progress for start.

Story telling: My previous story telling was pretty lame and fast paced not focusing for that. Only decent design and also pretty good scares. Now I'm focusing that and try not to make any mistakes "with writing" Sorry but I'm not best to writing any stories on the notes.

Design: This one I'm focused a lot and try to put my best skills to make something very nice and enjoyable to play and watch how this one is beautifully maded.

Scares: Yes this is one of my focused part to make something "Unique and something familiar to scares" I'm not Pro to do scripting but better than when I was making my first projects like "Fear The Darkness and Forbidden Castle" I dont count these even my good projects. Insidious was succesful some points and Unforgiven Memories.

Story shortly: It's sunny morning. I wake up in my castle and I notice a letter on my desk. I read it and then I go to see my servant "William". Later I sleep through the night. Then I woke up suddenly and I hear some strange voices. I have feeling something is not right.

Working hours total: Too much.

Story RELEASED!

Awakening to shattered life is here!

New Updates: v1.1 version, fixed some parts.

New Updates v1.2

- Fixed grunt kill bug in (Warehouse)
- Ladders
- Some lightning

1.3 Version final fixed: Fully playable to play both "end parts" and finish the story. Tested couple times!

Download Link Final version v1.3: http://www.mediafire.com/?2kzofcf1m98ekdd
ENJOY!

ModdB link here: http://www.moddb.com/mods/awakening-to-s...d-life-v13

Voice acting: 100%

Trailer released: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nE9q6oNQ7...ideo_title

Gameplay Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUWtAFip7Zc

In this story, you'll get:

- Ten full of action maps.
- Two choices to end the game.
- Great fear
- Good & fun Puzzles
- Chilling atmosphere
- Almost an hour of gameplay.

In this story, you really do not get:

- Cheap scares
- Clear and bright places, except at the beginning.
- Bad map design
- No intimidation
- Dull story
- Poorly designed to handle the problems and only the key to the door key on the door etc.


Let's Plays from TheIvanplenca: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRtTA_Y7h...ture=feedu

Let's play from WUANTplays: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mO1gbaYl6OU

Let's play from: Sooth:

Part 1: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mcl_v4bbvUc
Part 2: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JECvQeplo...re=related
Part 3: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tny6uH5Pa...re=related
Part 4: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=liyxQPeAo...re=related
Part 5: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KYGr_2RIQ...re=related
Part 6: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jPJt96tz...re=related
Part 7: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVvo-QYUg...re=related
Part 8: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GIvD19hpm...re=related

Screenshots:










Thanks all for playing and Appeciate feedback!

check my channel for the lp i made

letsplayhorrorgame

[ShiningBlader]

Really enjoyed this CS I'll give it a 9/10 ^^