The Castle Xard (Custom Story)

[Hadareon]

This is my first work in Level_Editor. (I'm 14 years) So that any criticism will be helpful.

1\4 level - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akDDE2Np2v0 (WARNING! This video with Color Correction)
2\4 level - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dw-Oxx9CewM (WARNING! This video with Color Correction)
3\4 level - Please play. (Will be scary)
4\4 level - Please play. (Will be scary)

Download:http://depositfiles.com/files/e3och3wir

Please comment! =В

[Kurton]

Regarding the first level; While the scares do well to keep you on your toes, they get a bit (and I know this word is used a lot, but) desensitizing, so after the first few it just felt like "Eh, the monster again." I also felt the hallway-room-hallway-hallway-room level layout was a bit unintuitive, but then again, even without story I felt interested in what should happen next around each corner, so good job on that anyway ;D

I'll review the other levels after I check out that video and figure out what the heck to do with this acid.

[HumiliatioN]

Nice map you got there. I played whole 4 maps... Final map that mansion part was very good and scary

Good job! Enjoyable map!

[Hadareon]

Kurton, ok! I will be fix it.
HumiliatioN, thanks! The second level like? ("cistern")

[HumiliatioN]

(04-25-2011 04:14 PM)Hadareon Wrote:  Kurton, ok! I will be fix it.
HumiliatioN, thanks! The second level like? ("cistern")

Yep like the cistern

[Hadareon]

video (part 3\4) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G6we0PnRBAo

[Dark Knight]

[Hadareon]

video (part 4\4) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3bGYpKreRk

[bobbo]

Cool so far, but I agree on the "uh, the monster again"-critique. Especially because after you have seen the monster itself several times there are scary moments where you only hear its grunts. In my opinion it should be the other way around.

Now I'm stuck on the second map:

Spoiler below!

There is this situation where you have to climb a broken ladder to then drop into a red colored room with a monster inside. The monster will vanish and you can enter a new corridor - but there every door seems to be locked.

[Dark Knight]

(05-15-2011 11:52 AM)bobbo Wrote:  Now I'm stuck on the second map:

Spoiler below!

There is this situation where you have to climb a broken ladder to then drop into a red colored room with a monster inside. The monster will vanish and you can enter a new corridor - but there every door seems to be locked.

Spoiler below!

look for key on the floor. with attention