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The School of the Dead...Brain Dead - nathanmcb - 06-19-2012
Hello, I am in the middle of making an Amnesia Custom Story, It is based on the school I go to and wanted to promote it.
You can find the trailer here
This Custom Story adds together the jump scares and the tension building
scares. compared to the real thing the trailer is nothing.
I'd like to thank Galt Aureus for allowing the use of the song Monolith.
If you would like to help with the Custom story please message me on youtube, here or at nathanmcb1@gmail.com.
RE: The School of the Dead...Brain Dead - Traggey - 06-19-2012
Some critique to help ya improve on this.
The levels look very bland, they need much more detail.
The lighting is very off, I could see light sipping through the walls which is never a good thing.
Things like bright red rooms are NOT scary, it just looks odd.
And as for jumpscares do remember to actually make some sense out of them, random scares that are just there for no other reason but to scare you are much on amateur level
Good luck with this.
RE: The School of the Dead...Brain Dead - nathanmcb - 06-19-2012
(06-19-2012, 04:05 PM)Traggey Wrote: Some critique to help ya improve on this.The lighting is bland because this set was made for the video, on the real thing it will look a lot more beautiful
The levels look very bland, they need much more detail.
The lighting is very off, I could see light sipping through the walls which is never a good thing.
Things like bright red rooms are NOT scary, it just looks odd.
And as for jumpscares do remember to actually make some sense out of them, random scares that are just there for no other reason but to scare you are much on amateur level
Good luck with this.
and my school is bland hehe but I promise it will look a lot better on the real story
RE: The School of the Dead...Brain Dead - Theforgot3n1 - 06-20-2012
That tunnel was interesting BUT you really need to make it seem more natural. It was squared too much. Make rocks, pebbles, holes with more rocks. Use a LOT of planes for it. That is my critique. It can look so awesome!
PS: Some scare including rock rumbling would be good. Should just be tension building.
RE: The School of the Dead...Brain Dead - nathanmcb - 06-20-2012
(06-20-2012, 09:41 AM)Theforgot3n1 Wrote: That tunnel was interesting BUT you really need to make it seem more natural. It was squared too much. Make rocks, pebbles, holes with more rocks. Use a LOT of planes for it. That is my critique. It can look so awesome!I am going to in the real thing, this was a quick design of whats to come
PS: Some scare including rock rumbling would be good. Should just be tension building.
RE: The School of the Dead...Brain Dead - Traggey - 06-20-2012
A trailer is ment to represent what to come, why would you create a trailer if all you're responding with towards our critique is that it's not what it'll be like in ''the real thing''.
That defeats the purpose of a trailer.
RE: The School of the Dead...Brain Dead - nathanmcb - 06-20-2012
(06-20-2012, 07:19 PM)Traggey Wrote: A trailer is ment to represent what to come, why would you create a trailer if all you're responding with towards our critique is that it's not what it'll be like in ''the real thing''.I'll be adding these rooms into the game but I wanted people opinions on if I should make the story or not.... understand?
That defeats the purpose of a trailer.
and it does represent whats to come but trailers a like betas. they wont stay exactly the same