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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Raymond - 03-19-2011

Nice screenshots Smile.


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Nye - 03-20-2011

(03-19-2011, 03:37 AM)Raymond Wrote: Nice screenshots Smile.

Thanks, I've been paying a LOT of attention to detail. Hopefully *fingers crossed*, you shouldn't experience any bugs whatsoever when you play the final release Smile


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Leu Radu - 03-31-2011

You are merciless... and I like it. The Demo was too intense, I didn't not expect such a strong start. It shows your great potential. The mood is set perfectly by that dreadful music at the beginning. I see some good scripting work there. I'm quite curious of what you will conjure up in the final story!

There are some minor details that did not fit (besides the ones already discussed). I was able to see the monster spawn, appearing out of thin air. I believe you intend the player to enter the room, but I lingered outside, curios about the glass bottle and where it came from. Also, in the flooded hall, the water pouring out of the fountain has a sharp angle that looks totally unrealistic.

I believe the story is close to being finished, isn't it? I would gladly offer help in testing it, should you need it.


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Nye - 04-01-2011

(03-31-2011, 11:44 PM)Leu Radu Wrote: You are merciless... and I like it. The Demo was too intense, I didn't not expect such a strong start. It shows your great potential. The mood is set perfectly by that dreadful music at the beginning. I see some good scripting work there. I'm quite curious of what you will conjure up in the final story!

There are some minor details that did not fit (besides the ones already discussed). I was able to see the monster spawn, appearing out of thin air. I believe you intend the player to enter the room, but I lingered outside, curios about the glass bottle and where it came from. Also, in the flooded hall, the water pouring out of the fountain has a sharp angle that looks totally unrealistic.

I believe the story is close to being finished, isn't it? I would gladly offer help in testing it, should you need it.

Thanks for the feedback, I have fixed the monster spawn and the fountain (amongst lots of other things!) I'm still playing around with the idea of having voice acting. Add my MSN: joenye@hotmail.co.uk if you would like to test the final story Smile


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Pandemoneus - 04-02-2011

Tsk tsk, I already told you about the fountain! :>


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Nye - 04-02-2011

(04-02-2011, 01:11 AM)Pandemoneus Wrote: Tsk tsk, I already told you about the fountain! :>

HEY! I fixed the fountain as soon as you told me about it Tongue

I haven't updated this demo for over a month Wink


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - theDARKW0LF - 04-05-2011

Great custom story, Nye! My only gripe is how many times you forced me to look at something. I'd prefer a little more freedom in that area. Other than that, it was really good!


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - KenOfAllTrades - 04-08-2011

Err... Is it supposed to crash right after you climb the ladder and go into the big hall filled with water? I crash every time I try to open the door


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Cryaotic - 04-08-2011

(04-08-2011, 11:00 AM)KenOfAllTrades Wrote: Err... Is it supposed to crash right after you climb the ladder and go into the big hall filled with water? I crash every time I try to open the door

Yes it is, that is the end of the demo.

I shall now put on my sunglasses emoticon. Cool


RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - KenOfAllTrades - 04-08-2011

(04-08-2011, 12:57 PM)Cryaotic Wrote:
(04-08-2011, 11:00 AM)KenOfAllTrades Wrote: Err... Is it supposed to crash right after you climb the ladder and go into the big hall filled with water? I crash every time I try to open the door

Yes it is, that is the end of the demo.

I shall now put on my sunglasses emoticon. Cool

Cool...