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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
GoranGaming Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Note that I made the gamma higher when i took this photo.

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08-11-2012, 03:53 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Explains a lot Smile

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08-11-2012, 04:28 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-09-2012, 11:02 AM)Traggey Wrote:
(08-09-2012, 10:57 AM)GoranGaming Wrote:
(08-08-2012, 03:53 AM)Zaari Wrote:
(08-05-2012, 07:04 PM)GoranGaming Wrote:
Spoiler below!

[Image: ISBzI.jpg]

You should probably add a few point lights near the candles.
Do you know how many pointlights I already have in there?
Too bright, needs more contrast between the lit and the non lit areas.
Better now?

Spoiler below!

[Image: 0IUC4.png]



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08-13-2012, 03:37 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(08-13-2012, 03:37 PM)GoranGaming Wrote:
(08-09-2012, 11:02 AM)Traggey Wrote:
(08-09-2012, 10:57 AM)GoranGaming Wrote:
(08-08-2012, 03:53 AM)Zaari Wrote:
(08-05-2012, 07:04 PM)GoranGaming Wrote:
Spoiler below!

[Image: ISBzI.jpg]

You should probably add a few point lights near the candles.
Do you know how many pointlights I already have in there?
Too bright, needs more contrast between the lit and the non lit areas.
Better now?

Spoiler below!

[Image: 0IUC4.png]


Looks way better, I like it.
08-13-2012, 04:39 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Introducing contrast to an area doesn't have to be "have x amount of lights on here, here and here", it can also be done with the color or type of light sources. Having a nice large blue window with all of those reddish/orangish candles would look good as well. Granted, there are many time where introducing an element like that wouldn't make sense, but it's just something to keep in mind.

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08-13-2012, 04:47 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Spoiler below!
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09-02-2012, 02:28 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

[Image: 28CD3F2CE8992CC22A81837C0A63DB81A62822F6]

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Yes I know. I'll have to delete that blur.

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09-29-2012, 10:56 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Am I the only one who likes the blur?

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09-30-2012, 07:56 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(09-30-2012, 07:56 AM)Nemet Robert Wrote: Am I the only one who likes the blur?
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09-30-2012, 08:01 AM
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Robby Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

No, really. The blur's quite a nice touch. Not the ImageTrail, that blows my mind. This RadialBlur is quite good. If you use it properly.

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09-30-2012, 08:02 AM
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