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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(04-26-2013, 02:07 PM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: Just a screenshot from my Intro in AFM. I was actually planning the level to go from night to morning but I can't change the billboard's colour, even if I already connect it to the light itself.



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The lighting looks uniform on the whole room, try to make the light zone lighter and the non-light zone darker.

Otherwise decent.

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04-30-2013, 01:43 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

This snapshot is taken from upcoming cs: Unreality - Beyond the death -

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05-02-2013, 11:35 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Skybox is nice, and the light coming out of the well.

But you should add a Spotlight above the well, aiming downwards, casting a shadow.
05-02-2013, 03:29 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-02-2013, 03:29 PM)Rapture Wrote: Skybox is nice, and the light coming out of the well.

But you should add a Spotlight above the well, aiming downwards, casting a shadow.

Good point. It's pretty obvious , but it's wierd that i didn't pay attention to it.

EDIT: Like this?
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05-02-2013, 03:53 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Very pretty Smile

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05-02-2013, 08:27 PM
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(05-02-2013, 08:27 PM)Streetboat Wrote: Very pretty Smile

Thank you! Honestly, this is all i can do. It took almost 3 days to master this map
and i am glad that even someone can appreciate my effort! Smile
05-02-2013, 09:59 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-02-2013, 09:59 PM)Pyöveli Wrote:
(05-02-2013, 08:27 PM)Streetboat Wrote: Very pretty Smile



Thank you! Honestly, this is all i can do. It took almost 3 days to master this map

and i am glad that even someone can appreciate my effort! Smile
Nice work : ]

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05-02-2013, 10:22 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Haven't posted anything in this thread in ages so sup
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This was fucking impossible to get a good screenshot of and you still can't really see the environment well so fuck everything :D

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05-03-2013, 10:13 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

poor screenshot angle 0/10 would not bang

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05-03-2013, 04:59 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

idk why i posted that looking back on it now

was probs just really fucking tired

anyways here's something actually worth sharing
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i made a ceiling out of water

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05-04-2013, 12:06 AM
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