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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
Kreekakon Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

kman what are u doing? stahp

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09-15-2013, 08:51 AM
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Kman Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

that entire level is basically like that sorta shit + parkour and other obstacles lol

it's going to take a very

very long time

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09-15-2013, 08:55 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Um, it seems like my image is ignored...

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09-15-2013, 09:15 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

well it's kinda hard to give a really good critique of it cause right now it looks super unfinished - it's literally just a bed, a window, a door, and shadows

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09-15-2013, 09:31 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(09-15-2013, 09:31 AM)Kman Wrote: well it's kinda hard to give a really good critique of it cause right now it looks super unfinished - it's literally just a bed, a window, a door, and shadows

I'M ASKING FOR THE LIGHTING

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09-15-2013, 09:33 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

it looks okaaaay but it's not really dynamic at all, right in front of the windows should be bright and near the back it should start fading to a darker shade. the light beam cast directly out of the window (or in this case the spotlight you have that's casting the shadow) should be brightest part coming from the window and should be bright enough that you can clearly tell it apart from the rest of the light

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09-15-2013, 09:38 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

My very own grand hall!

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A bit dark but anyway!
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09-17-2013, 08:38 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

The map is pretty dark if you compared it to the light that was getting through the Windows in Screenshot 2.

Also, you need to fix your tiling at the ceiling and the floor.

And um, it's a bit empty.

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09-17-2013, 09:26 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Since it's a grand hall, it should be well lit up. A grand hall is mostly a place that shows no danger. Therefore no darkness. Corridors and such should have darkness, but not grand halls Wink

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09-17-2013, 11:22 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Well the house have been empty for 10 years so that's why there's no candles.

I will fix the tilling in just a second. Thanks Smile
09-17-2013, 11:59 AM
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