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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
Echohalls Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Well I have 0 idea,

But I edited the map again...
Spoiler below!
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03-19-2014, 04:58 PM
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FlawlessHappiness Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

The tree-pillars are a little bit weird though.. try something else.

Trying is the first step to success.
03-19-2014, 08:41 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-19-2014, 04:58 PM)Echohalls Wrote: Well I have 0 idea,

But I edited the map again...
Spoiler below!
[Image: tRpSMf7.jpg]

What plain you used for the ground?

Darkness,darkness is everywhere...
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03-20-2014, 02:51 PM
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Echohalls Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

No planes, i used dirt_floor from cellarbase

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03-20-2014, 09:11 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Hm.. I guys and girls. Im kinda new here (first post ever). This is the first "serious" room I have ever made.
I have only been using the editor for a few days so it's not that good. But what do you think? Smile

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03-21-2014, 12:34 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Looks good for your first rooms Smile
This is your first time with the Level Editor?
My frst room had no Light, furnture or billboards.
It looks good for me but lets wait for other guys to reply.

The question that will never be answered:
SOMA WHY ARE YOU SO BEAUTIFUL? ;_;
03-21-2014, 12:45 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-21-2014, 12:45 PM)MasterPig Wrote: Looks good for your first rooms Smile
This is your first time with the Level Editor?
My frst room had no Light, furnture or billboards.
It looks good for me but lets wait for other guys to reply.
Yes it's the first time with the Editor.
But I have been looking through tutorials and the maps from the game.
03-21-2014, 12:52 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I like the second more then the first, the lighting is rather bland in the first, more intresting in the second.

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03-21-2014, 01:41 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-21-2014, 01:41 PM)WIWWM Wrote: I like the second more then the first, the lighting is rather bland in the first, more intresting in the second.
What can I do to improve it?

Note: It's the same room from different angles.
03-21-2014, 02:07 PM
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7heDubz Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

The light in the second looks like it extends further the then in the first... Huh.

The books look copy pasted in.
At school at the moment so not sure if this is helpful at all but mess with the lighting around the windows, point lights point lights point lights.

03-21-2014, 03:22 PM
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