[WIP] Try out my map please! want feedback :)

[Fralexxelarf]

Hi !
This is my first custom story, feel free to try it out: http://www.mediafire.com/?lqsm64rqgts37e5
It's in beta stage, so some constructive feedback would be great

I put a LOT more effort into the last rooms, it ended up pretty well if you ask me. I will keep adding more rooms, and you can probably see me getting a better mapper/scripter with every level you go through.

I'm still writing the story so there's none of it ingame.

Spoiler below!

I can't printscreen while in amnesia so i had to record with fraps (and fraps messes up the light in amnesia) and then printscreen the video. So that's why the quality is bad.
/thanks

[Fralexxelarf]

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[devin413]

Map design was ok


somre jump scares didn't scare me

and some scares me to hell

the level before the sewer there I dont know what to do.

and some notes are useless ^.^


but a good cs to play

[Fralexxelarf]

(02-21-2012 06:48 PM)devin413 Wrote:  Map design was ok


somre jump scares didn't scare me

and some scares me to hell

the level before the sewer there I dont know what to do.

and some notes are useless ^.^


but a good cs to play

thanks, I have removed several "scares" because they sucked haha! As i said, I'm not done with the story, so i havent imported it to the cs.

[Plague]

Im gonna try it now, you will get feedback later.

Ok i tried it, and i had an awesome time playing it
But i think some rooms are way to big, try to reduce the size of them in the your next CS.
Also, your custom story only scared me once because it was way too expectable.
the only time i jumped was when the closet opened by itself and i got killed by the brute hehe.
(sorry for my horrible english) it's pretty late here.
but DUDE! you did a very good job.
i hope to see the full release
i rate this map 4/5

[Fralexxelarf]

(02-22-2012 09:17 PM)Plague Wrote:  Im gonna try it now, you will get feedback later.

Ok i tried it, and i had an awesome time playing it
But i think some rooms are way to big, try to reduce the size of them in the your next CS.
Also, your custom story only scared me once because it was way too expectable.
the only time i jumped was when the closet opened by itself and i got killed by the brute hehe.
(sorry for my horrible english) it's pretty late here.
but DUDE! you did a very good job.
i hope to see the full release
i rate this map 4/5

Thanks! Ill fix

Spoiler below!

The obvious scare with the locked door in the first room and remove some other scares from both the 1st and the 2nd room.

[mexonizze17]

Hi, i will try your custom story and post the gameplay on youtube, if it is okay with you?

[SilentStriker]

Is this story supposed to be serious or just for fun?

I played it and here is what I think...

-Cheap scares

-Unoriginal scares

-Brute you cannot escape

-Big dark empty corridor that is unecessery

-No billboards or lighting in the windows

and then the stairs between 2 maps.. what was that? and you could have built it better because it looks weird when you tilt the walls

Good hidden with the second floor in the bedroom but annoying that you need to run down the corridor to get 3 boxes and then run back

I didn't finish it but this was the things I reacted to.
And it's mostly negative because I don't like cheap stories, I like the well made with a good story and no cheap scares

[Shives]

It's not bad
It's a mixture of Jumpscares and monsterscares.

@SilentStriker:
You can escape from the brute,because I did it

[SilentStriker]

(02-26-2012 12:21 PM)Shives Wrote:  It's not bad
It's a mixture of Jumpscares and monsterscares.

@SilentStriker:
You can escape from the brute,because I did it

True but the thing is that if you hide in the closet it wont disappear but I was too tired to even bother trying to run from it