The Maze

[HumiliatioN]

My feedback honestly:

Uhm..

Spoiler below!

Honestly.. I was kind of looking better map design and overall creation. But little disappoint here, first map "okay you enter the mystery maze" then door maze begins. Okay if you ever played Nepsis very good custom story.. this is like a copy of that, I don't blame you that you copied or something, but that's almost same idea as nepsis. Okay it was okay, couple nice sound scares and door bangs and monsters too.

Then final map begins, okay basically in my opinion I hate mazes a lot and this one is too little confusing and annoying, couple cheap scares too.

I'm not usually give this bad feedback, but I'm just honesty, but don't worry.. make improves and don't rush maps and you can get better feedback next time I'm just helping you, don't hate me, it's okay story for your first I understand that :3

Well, to his credit, I don't think he copied from Nepsis. The original was just a maze of doors with no sound. I suggested adding the banging, maybe having it slowly build up until every door has pounding and screaming coming from behind it near the end and having it suddenly cut out the moment the player steps out of the maze. I kind of got that inspired from Nepsis (thanks for reminding me of the name btw, I couldn't think of it), but mostly it was from the half life mod Cry of Fear. I think he is working on something like that. What do you think of that idea?

Anyways, aren't I supposed to be writing some stuff for ya? I'm bored here, man!


Oh, yeah that. Sry I'm really busy at the moment at studying, I will continue whole project really soon and make some ideas for the story.