A track I made with fruity loops.

[Kurton]

The energy is nice and I like the sci-fi "acidic" tone but I think some other instruments brought in on top of it would add variation and make it a lot better, particularly subtle higher-pitched ones since the song is just sitting mainly in the lows.

I also think the thumpy synth-bass is too loud, either turn it down some or EQ out the lower frequencies so it doesn't rumble quite so much. The swelling however is really cool and gives a sense of unease. Overall I say keep rolling with it :)