NEED HELP WITH .LANG

[pandasFTW]

hi all! so, please respond, this is all i need to get my custom story right! i seem to have a problem, i have a key... with a name and description , which works fine, then i add the note, with name and desc, under the "Journal" category, but when i do that, both the key and the note appear blank!?!?!?!??! its so damn frustrating... because i,ve done everything the tutorials told me to :'( i,ll send my .lang file if anyone can spot what's wrong
secondly, how do i make a locked door say, like " its locked, there must be a key somewhere " or something like that when i try to open it? because when i try, it just appears blank.. I... NEED... HELP! come on please! my first custom story, i,m so proud, aside from these two fahking things

oh and i,ll be looking for beta testers too, once i get this note, sh*t working
hoping to hear from someone, as i am just about to piss my pants in frustration, over this xD

peace out