Amnesia: Finding Them

[Nickshrike]

Wasn't bad for a first story, I can tell you put some time into attempting to decorate the place which is better than some people, but some objects were incorrectly aligned, maybe more some more time into the specifics next time?

Here are some problems/suggestions (im a bit critical so don't think your custom story was really terrible)

Spoiler below!

First door had weird lighting on it and was very dark.
One of the barrels has a candle on it so it couldn't be moved >_>
Stretched picture of Alexander is a tad weird.
Some of the lights have lighting when there is no way those rooms could be anything but pitch black.
The room that said "probably nothing in the closet" has some incorrectly aligned walls.
Teleporting naked guy in that closet. <_<
Could of set some patrol nodes for the monster.
Oh, the monster was a poofer, not good. D:
When I come out of the door in the dungeon I see a interact symbol, but nothing is there to interact with.
More teleporting naked guys.
Floating barrels and boxes in a room in the dungeon.
When I come out the dungeon I am facing the leveldoor I came out of.
Too many locked doors I couldn't go in.
Would of been nice to have some more monsters with proper paths.
I didn't run out of oil or come close to it once.
Wasn't feeling at edge really.

If you take all advice and criticism on board and make another story, im sure you can make a really good one