Extra_english.lang bug

[Talvy]

My little advice:

In hints and mementos, consider not writing in first-person. For instance, instead of writing "I can hear a loud sound behind this door.", write "A loud sound is coming from behind this door. (or something like that)"
This way it's easier to get into the main character.

But as I pointed out, it doesn't always have to be like that. If it's something like the character's diary, or something else that simply doesn't work in passive, it actually should be in first-person.

But this is just my opinion. :)