extra_english.lang file

[aerialproductions]

Hello,

It seems a lot of people have issues with this file, I've gone through a few threads and looked at problems people had and made sure mine was correct, but it's still not working.. Nothing actually works in game.
Its probably something stupid, but I mean I've looked at other peoples scripts and mine isn't really that different. Its in my custom story folder, and it is a .LANG, so I'm assuming I've scripted something wrong!

Please help me out
Thanks!

Script

<LANGUAGE>
<CATEGORY Name="CustomStoryMain">
<Entry Name="Description">This is Alyssa's story...</Entry>
</CATEGORY>

<CATEGORY Name="Levels">
<Entry Name="intro">Path to Ashenworth</Entry>
<Entry Name="level1">Lower Mansion</Entry>
<Entry Name="level2">Dungeon</Entry>
<Entry Name="level3">Upper Mansion</Entry>
</CATEGORY>

<CATEGORY Name="Inventory">
//Study Key
<Entry Name="ItemName_key_tomb_rusty_1">Mansion Key</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemDesc_key_tomb_rusty_1">Key used to unlock the side enterance of the mansion.</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemName_crowbar_1">Crowbar</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemDesc_crowbar_1">Can be used to pry open doors.</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemName_crowbar_2">Crowbar</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemDesc_crowbar_2">Can be used to pry open doors.</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemName_crowbar_3">Crowbar</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemDesc_crowbar_3">Can be used to pry open doors.</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemName_crowbar_4">Crowbar</Entry>
<Entry Name="ItemDesc_crowbar_4">Can be used to pry open doors.</Entry>


<CATEGORY Name="Journal">

<Entry Name="Note_letter_alexanders_room_Name">Letter to my Son</Entry>
<Entry Name="Note_letter_alexanders_room_Text">Alexander[br][br]Hopefully this reaches you,</Entry>