Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play!

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Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play!

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RE: Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play!

A couple of things.

First. You did really good with the bridge key puzzle, took me a few minutes find the key.

Second. You should fix the ending where you pry the front door open and it cuts to the credits, the sound of the door opening keeps looping.

Other than that, it was pretty good. Maybe you could of added a Grunt wandering around in the beginning, but all in all it was a good 1st custom story.

09-13-2013, 11:31 PM

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Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play! - by Wolfpa - 08-13-2013, 07:45 PM

RE: Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play! - by LHudson - 08-13-2013, 07:57 PM

RE: Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play! - by DnALANGE - 08-14-2013, 04:32 PM

RE: Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play! - by PutraenusAlivius - 08-14-2013, 04:40 PM

RE: Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play! - by DnALANGE - 08-14-2013, 04:44 PM

RE: Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play! - by Slanderous - 08-14-2013, 09:20 PM

RE: Where am I? -- My first custom story, pls play! - by CyrustheVirus73 - 09-13-2013, 11:31 PM

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