A minor text update by me.

[Googolplex]

Things are little cleaner now

Good luck with your project, Googol!

P.S. Insults and memes will be deleted without warning.

Thanks.
I just wanted to know what people from Frictional Games would think about the topic. Why they did it right in Penumbra and changed it in Amnesia?
I gladly read Thomas' blogs about core elements of game design, and this is a core element in my opinion. A little thing with huge impact. The wise of texts can influence the feeling very much.

The english example in my 2nd picture may be not the best formulation - because english isn't my first language. But I hope you can see what I mean. My german version reads much better. And I would be very lucky when they would be implemented into an official update.

Are here any other germans to test my mew "hints"?
I need feedback!

Amnesia TDD had the same problem with the mementos - I also changed that. Fortunately AAMFP's diaries are written correct, where the protagonist always writes "I".