[DEMO] Horror story

[Josh707]

Hey everyone

So i've been working on this map for like a week now (I'm new at this) and I wanted some people to test out my map and give me feedback/tips/suggestions like other people do. I'm a 'scipt kiddie' as some of you call us... but I followed some wiki tutorials and used common sense and this is what I made!
The play-time is maybe like 5-10 minutes? Yes it is terribly short. I'm still working on it and if you guys think it's more than decent i'll finish it and actually put the story in (I left a note that just summarizes it.. I have an actual story in mind)

Download: here

Screenshot:

Spoiler below!

If the link doesn't work tell me and i'll upload it again somewhere else!

Thanks for trying it out