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Nothing to see here. [Project Stopped]
SkyeGU Offline
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RE: West River Motel [WIP]

Played through what you had available:

Spoiler below!

Pretty good atmosphere. You got a few good jumps out of me. The (apparition of the) monster spawning after turning the crank was a nice touch. I was expecting a door to open or something, not a monster. Clever!

Looking forward to more. For now:

The note in the second floor office room. "Their" in "Their closing us down!" should be "They're". Also the wording in the note seems a little odd, unless this is intended to be how the writer of the note actually wrote the note. Then that's fine.

In the last room on the right on the second floor, where you use the crowbar to get in, I failed to properly descend on the ladder after right clicking it and instead fell all the way down and was injured. Also, when you climb up the ladder, you can see through to the whole level design (ie: It's not properly enclosed/walled in). Climbing up worked fine, climbing down resulted in painful falls... twice.

Lastly, I was able to hide in the wardrobe before Scruffy (the Grunt) got to me, and instead of pacing or disappearing, he just stood squarely between the two doors with his back to me. I eventually realized that he was an apparition (I threw the broom at him and it went through him) and then made him disappear... but perhaps you may want some kind of backup plan to make sure he disappears? Your call.


As mentioned, i'm looking forward to more!
04-25-2011, 06:55 AM
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Messages In This Thread
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by Tiero - 04-24-2011, 08:07 AM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by skypeskype - 04-24-2011, 08:51 AM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by Doctorcheese - 04-24-2011, 03:34 PM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by laser50 - 04-24-2011, 03:45 PM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by laser50 - 04-24-2011, 11:19 PM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by Dark Knight - 04-25-2011, 07:25 AM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by ZxBrad - 04-25-2011, 06:15 AM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by SkyeGU - 04-25-2011, 06:55 AM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by laser50 - 04-25-2011, 09:26 AM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by HumiliatioN - 04-25-2011, 09:52 AM
RE: West River Motel [WIP] - by laser50 - 04-25-2011, 10:12 AM



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