Penumbra: Overture - Text Walkthrough

[Willbreaker]

I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I will but I have noticed two things, which bother me.

You write thru - this makes the walkthrough look cheap. Write through instead.

You also write with some additions like "you start in a cabin" (Yea, ok, we know. No need to include that info). Also some batteries? Write like you know how many things there are! Write pick up THE batteries. It makes the walkthrough seem more proffesional.

Sum : Good content, might wanna improve the writing.

/Breaker