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RE: [Fictional Reading Sequel] The Ascent of the Dark series

(10-07-2011 03:54 AM)LuckyBlackCatXIII Wrote:  Whoo hoo! Another addition, and 5 pages long at that!

While reading I do have one question, and I don't mean this in any catty or mean way I swear: do you have anyone proof reading your stories before you post them here on the forums? If you don't already you should think about getting a close friend to give their insight on the stories, since people can add ideas and suggestions you alone might not have thought of (plus the bright side of having a friend do it makes criticism easier to take than only having strangers do so). I only ask because though I find these stories good I feel it could be even better! Then again if you're just writing these for fun and not trying to be super serious I really wouldn't pay attention to what I've just said, ha ha! As long as you're enjoying what you're doing, right?

Ugh, I type too much on this thread I swear. Either way I'm excited to see the next part, good luck!

PS: I'm going to admit I laughed a little when one of the characters introduced was named 'Fabio'. I'm so mature
I like youBig Grin
Yes I have someone proofreading my stories, just look at Post #3.
I enjoy doing this and take it quite seriously so if any of you has suggestions I'll be glad to know.
GLAD YOU LIKED IT!
THIS IS JUST THE BEGINNING!Big Grin

10-07-2011 03:50 PM
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Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 09-10-2011, 02:35 AM
RE: [Fictional Reading Sequel] The Ascent of the Dark series - Fomzo - 10-07-2011 03:50 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 11-15-2011, 10:03 AM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Gasjockey - 11-15-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 11-15-2011, 08:22 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 12-12-2011, 11:13 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - BlueFury - 12-12-2011, 11:57 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 01-09-2012, 08:37 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 01-10-2012, 06:44 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 01-11-2012, 08:57 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 01-12-2012, 01:42 AM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Gasjockey - 01-12-2012, 10:41 AM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 03-05-2012, 03:48 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Gasjockey - 03-05-2012, 04:03 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 04-13-2012, 02:50 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-04-2012, 10:05 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Mr.Amnesia - 05-08-2012, 08:28 AM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-10-2012, 03:06 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Bridge - 05-11-2012, 07:31 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-11-2012, 09:07 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Bridge - 05-11-2012, 10:04 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-13-2012, 09:48 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - here4uallday - 05-19-2012, 01:13 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-19-2012, 10:05 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Bridge - 05-20-2012, 12:22 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-20-2012, 11:34 AM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Mr.Amnesia - 05-20-2012, 01:29 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-20-2012, 06:39 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Bridge - 05-21-2012, 12:23 AM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-28-2012, 02:09 PM
RE: Fan-made Amnesia Sequel - Fomzo - 05-29-2012, 06:55 PM
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