[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread

[CarnivorousJelly]

What do you guys think about this one?
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It's from my uncoming custom story.

Try turning "shadows" on for the spotlight you currently have

The colour needs to be a bit more yellow, it doesn't suit the exterior light, which is really really yellow, kind of like an incandescent bulb. So you could make the exterior lighting a bit more blue or the spotlight a bit more yellow.

The rest of the room is really really dark, so I can't see what else is there or what to actually comment on, using a dim pointlight around the window and (possibly) a brighter boxlight would help with that and it would be more realistic because light radiates out from windows and will bounce off the rest of the walls (like this).

Other than that, the room could be more detailed (but I'm a detail-obsessed crazy person, so don't mind me)

And don't say your lighting sucks, it's better than a lot of other people's lighting. At least all the lights aren't white :D