New story on the way!

[Kman]

One tip, don't use torches when you're working with mansion base, it looks kinda awkward and out of place. Try sticking o the more fancy candles as they'll fit better. I'd suggest not mingling different types of level design too much just as a general rule (like mansion base, cellar base, castle base) as it can often end up looking kinda funny. Also there doesn't appear to be any boxlight in your screenshots, that's an important part of any custom story (but almost all beginners make that mistake, so it's ok).