Update on my first official story, but need feedback and help

[The Rock Worm]

The brute would be eaten before he did anything. You can't kill a worm. You just need a stick to beat up the brute.

When you said 'You can't kill a worm.' I just had a funny thought. If that worm is a nightmare to us, imagine those birds who would prey on tiny worms seeing this MONSTER worm