Amnesia - canis abusus [FIXED]

[Eliphas]

I do not understand why you do this kind of Custom Story. The map design is ok, there is a new monster which is quite interesting; in other words, you have the tools to make a very good and surprising story. But there isn't any work on the storyline, it's like :

Spoiler below!

You wake up in a wood in front of a house and you don't remember a shit of what you have done before, so you go in the mansion instead of leaving in order to go back to your home, admitting that you have not forgotten where you live... Then you touch the door, THEN THERE IS A GIANT DOG WITH AN EXPLODED HEAD WHO SHOUTS AT YOU AND DISAPPEARS IN A PUFF OF SMOKE AND... AND THEN YOU FIND A NOTE WITH A MAN WHO SEEMS TO LIVE HERE AND WONDER WHY HIS DOGS HAVE AN EXPLODED HEAD ! WHAT AN EXISTENTIAL QUESTION !

And the jumpscares, good lord ! This is absolutely not credible.

*Get an item* "WHOAW ! How unexpected ! There is a monster behind me, ready to cut off my head !"

And by the way, better to opt for a good old windscare instead of bet on the Virgin of Nuremberg who is so common and boring. I expected to collide with the penis of a naked man in the hallway, thank you god that did not happen.
To continue on the "storyline" : Even the behavior of your monster is sensless !
*Look at the avatar*
I bet that was a custom story for a guy like Pewdie or sort of. It's a pity, you have probably the skills to make a better custom story.