Tenebris Lake Full Conversion

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Maybe, one more thing I could think of as far as critique goes would be the grammar of notes and subtitles. I often saw uncapitalized "i"s and missing apostraphes in contractions. It's no big deal, really, but perhaps proofread everything a bit more if you make an update to the game. It would make it all look more professional. :3

Yeah, that was done already when the mod was released, but got accidentally left out.


Also, to the guy quoting my laughter, I was more laughing because of who was saying the story didn't make sense rather than not agreeing with the statement, since that guy is responsible for one of the most nonsensical CS ever created (but don't get me wrong, it is also one of the most enjoyable)

Anyways, the story does make sense, it's just not executed quite as it should be in the mod, but it's being worked on. Adding mementos of the player's thoughts about what just occurred and stuff like that should help a bit.