The escape chapter one

[Kman]

even so, the levels wont mean anything without a solid story..

Well, a first custom story doesen't make him a professional now does it? I'm sure he'll develop further on after this. Learning from your own mistakes is the best thing in my opinion.

I'm sorry but I'm sick of people using their age and "it's my first story!" as excuses for crappy quality. That's no excuse, if you really need an example look at Afraid of Monsters. That was made by a 12 year old and it was his first mod ever, and it won mod of the year the year it came out and is still commonly regarded as one of the best horror mods out there. If you need something Amnesia related, look at White Night, that was Tan's first mod and people say it's one of the best custom stories there is.