[WIP] The Man Machine [CANCELLED]

[CorinthianMerchant]

I will listen to all forms of cricism!
New Patio Screenshots!

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Ok. You asked for criticism. so criticism you'll get!

I personally loved what you did in the front page's screenshots. the lighting was good and the particle systems fit perfectly. but the same i can not say from last 3 screens. I personally did not like what you did whit the tree and the "decorative plant life" it looks off and somewhat random, You could have done something interesting whit plants growing inside the castle or whatever we are seeing. but you did not fully developed that concept.

my final statement: it still needs some work on it.

OK Danny, thank you for your honest opinion!