The Subconscious Trials

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Just found this topic and only have read the first post (had a quick glance on the other ones though), but I have a little suggestion about the story... either explain why this unknown man wanted to call Alan, and only him (this could be a pain in the ass if you haven't followed this way since the beginning), or make the main character find about this "job" in another source (newspaper, internet, radio, TV, etc)(easily do-able). Receiving a call from an unknown man offering a job seems very unlikely to happen unless this man wants something for some reason, or they were friends a long time ago and this guy knew about the situation of his old friend, something along this. Anyway, I'm looking forward to this story, good luck!