Story I wrote

[Adny]

You named the protagonist and the main location after your forum alias...gooooood. Your writing skills could use some work too. Use basic imagery and stop overusing the short sentence; it's good for building suspense in your writing, but when used for every sentence it really limits the amount of information you can put out. Work on your diction as well.


OT (kinda): If you want your mod to be popular, put plenty of time and effort into the mapping and scripting so that it resembles the original game (or better); posting gimmicky stuff like this won't improve the quality or its appeal to the community.