PHOBIA - Tales of Terror (Horror Web Series)

[J.R.S.S.]

Yes, I understand that and I don't have anything against that type of format (I enjoy The Twilight Zone - what I've seen anyway). When I say that the narrative is minimalistic I'm not referring to the overarching narrative but the isolated narrative contained within each episode. I just feel the episodes don't really tell a compelling story. Maybe it just isn't for me. BTW, the latest episode was a step up in my opinion, but most of the problems I mentioned I felt are still prevalent to some degree.

Ah, I see. Well, the biggest issue is the time limit we have when making these. It's quite difficult to grow character development and a full story in such a short time (usually, 5 minutes or less). Since these are also inspired by Creepypastas, we just wish to tell a creepy story in a short time. I have some special plans for the second half of the seasons so perhaps the new episodes will entertain you more. Thank you again for the comments.

It's alright, and definitely has a creepy vibe, but the music is a bit too wet sounding, and the camerawork could use some improving. Episode 6 however, looks a lot better. Only problem would be acting, which being a filmmaker myself, I know how hard it is to find really good actors. I wish it had a little bit more story though... I can see a ton of potential here. Perhaps I could submit one of my unused scripts for you to build off of. I have tons.

Thank you for the comments. I'd love to look at one of your unused scripts, always love to see new ideas. You can go ahead and send me whatever you wish to my email at jer08k2@gmail.com