Amnesia: City Of Souls

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RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls

It looks realistic to me, but maybe the use of "we" isn't perfect. As an example, instead of "we will seal the entrance", "the entrance will be sealed" would sound less personal, so more professional.

This is just my personal opinion, though.

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Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 10-26-2013, 11:06 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by i3670 - 10-26-2013, 11:19 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 10-26-2013, 11:31 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by WALP - 10-26-2013, 04:31 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 10-26-2013, 05:16 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by daortir - 10-26-2013, 06:24 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 10-26-2013, 06:50 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 10-27-2013, 01:24 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by CarnivorousJelly - 10-27-2013, 08:16 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 10-27-2013, 08:26 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by i3670 - 10-27-2013, 08:51 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by CarnivorousJelly - 10-27-2013, 09:51 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by TravelMuffin - 10-27-2013, 09:59 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 10-27-2013, 11:33 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-01-2013, 10:02 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by CarnivorousJelly - 11-01-2013, 11:53 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by i3670 - 11-02-2013, 01:04 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-02-2013, 01:31 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by CarnivorousJelly - 11-02-2013, 04:18 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-03-2013, 01:02 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-03-2013, 05:35 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by i3670 - 11-03-2013, 06:01 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-04-2013, 11:13 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by The chaser - 11-05-2013, 02:07 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Alex Ros - 11-05-2013, 02:15 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-05-2013, 03:32 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Gilligan's Hell - 11-05-2013, 07:18 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-09-2013, 01:10 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Amnesia Gamer - 11-09-2013, 12:18 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-09-2013, 04:13 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-10-2013, 04:41 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-10-2013, 07:50 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-12-2013, 05:26 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by i3670 - 11-12-2013, 05:40 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-12-2013, 05:46 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by CarnivorousJelly - 11-13-2013, 04:23 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Potato - 11-13-2013, 05:41 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-16-2013, 02:16 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by WALP - 11-16-2013, 03:06 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-17-2013, 11:05 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Xander512 - 11-21-2013, 08:24 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-21-2013, 12:47 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by The chaser - 11-21-2013, 09:05 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-21-2013, 10:06 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-24-2013, 01:46 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Xander512 - 11-24-2013, 07:27 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-24-2013, 12:07 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Xander512 - 11-25-2013, 06:05 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Gilligan's Hell - 11-25-2013, 06:51 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-25-2013, 07:25 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Xander512 - 11-25-2013, 08:32 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by BeartrixTheStrange - 11-27-2013, 01:00 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-27-2013, 04:31 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by BeartrixTheStrange - 11-27-2013, 08:12 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-27-2013, 07:42 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-27-2013, 10:20 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 11-28-2013, 08:05 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by BeartrixTheStrange - 11-28-2013, 11:27 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-01-2013, 04:41 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by WALP - 12-01-2013, 05:18 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Xander512 - 12-01-2013, 10:30 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-01-2013, 11:11 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-05-2013, 11:42 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by BeartrixTheStrange - 12-05-2013, 11:58 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-06-2013, 02:50 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-07-2013, 05:44 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-16-2013, 09:24 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by i3670 - 12-16-2013, 10:47 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-16-2013, 10:50 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by i3670 - 12-17-2013, 01:57 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 12-17-2013, 04:55 PM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by thomthom44 - 04-02-2014, 11:23 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by AGP - 04-03-2014, 08:35 AM

RE: Amnesia: City Of Souls - by Artyom - 04-05-2014, 10:16 AM

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