My story.

[Radical Batz]

Here is my full review:

The first map was bright imo, you could tone it down or make some candles.


The second map was dark as shit and very empty, you could use some grass and some foliage and you could add a pointlight to the bonfires.

The third map, why isn't there a door behind me since I came from a door?
And was glitchy as hell! Walls stuck to eachother, black holes that you can see out of the map and very bright once again! Pls don't rush when making a level, take your time and put some effort into it. and when exiting a level door which was on the second floor spawned me back downstairs,you should add another playerstart area on the second floor when exiting there.

Spoiler below!

The fourth map, I don't even wanna ....
Like what's the point of a mansion room filled with lots of corpses everywhere with some torches, like there isn't even a story in this cs

Spoiler below!

The fifth map is cool and all but was kinda hard.

The sixth map was very bright once again, walls glitched

The 7th map wasn't that bad actually!

The 8th map was alright but you placed decals like randomly everywhere that don't even match the point of the map and the music did not even match it as well and again walls glitched and put playerstart areas near the doors that you get back in cause it keeps spawning you in the first area which seems weird.

The 9th map was very dark and glitched walls again and you used music from outlast which i don't think you're allowed to tho

The 10th map, Why is there a minecraft block there? How did an amnesia cs turn into minecraft? And the cellar did not have a ceiling that I can see through the map and again and again all the walls are glitched.

Spoiler below!

The 11th map was too bright and glitchy and again I don't think it's a good idea or you're allowed to use music from outlast!


The 12th map, why do you find another lantern when you already have one, the map is full of glitched planes?

The 13th map, why does it give you another god damn lantern? I have 3 lanterns now,and again I don't think anybody is allowed to use outlast music.
And why is there a random worm just sitting on the ground? And so many minecraft blocks? Pls spend more time on a cs.

14th map, very empty and gltiched walls and when exiting it, it gets an error

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FATAL ERROR
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FATAL ERROR: Could not load world file 'custom_stories/Dark Places/maps/.map'

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OK   
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I am very sorry but I give this mod a 2/10 for now :/, It had no story, too many glitches and bugs with errors, music stolen from outlast that I think it's illegal, minecraft?, and errors, I know this is your first cs but next time try to put some more effort and hard work before releasing one

Try to put some more effort into custom story making pls and make sure to test it oftenly, thnx. And don't forget to look at other maps and maybe try to open the level editor when you're bored and try to do something very, very creative and spent time on that? kay?

But i'm not going to make progress anymore. i lost my AsylumHallWay map. and that map was important. i lost my area's everything

It doesn't mean you lost a map then you have to stop, I've lost like 3 maps when was makin a cs once and I just tried to build one right away!

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Oh and You can upload this custom story on moddb if you want, but to warn you, you might get bad reviews but some reviews might help you to make your custom story better! Alright?

Not forcing you to upload it on moddb, but for some criticism to make your cs better.

Goodluck