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"Wake" - Complete :)
Mina Darsh Offline
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RE: "Wake" - a Very High Quality Story

Gonna be picky here if you're after quality but, hopefully, performance as well.

First what I like to suggest is to re-adjust the solar rays. They're going right through the bricks below the window in the second screenshot for example, where they should normally stop as soon they hit an object. So either make them really short (If that works.) or change their angle.

Also, be careful with how many shadow casting spotlights you use, it can really stress the computer a lot of it is overdone, I suggest reading the Wiki about properly using the lights.

Last but not least, in my opinion the carpets in the last image are a bit overdone, I'd say it is better looking to lay a few less, but make them larger, it would just look better.

Otherwise, nicely done, looks promising.
09-23-2010, 02:20 PM
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"Wake" - Complete :) - by DamnNoHtml - 09-23-2010, 02:16 AM
RE: "Wake" - a Very High Quality Story - by sTiKy - 09-23-2010, 02:04 PM
RE: "Wake" - a Very High Quality Story - by Mina Darsh - 09-23-2010, 02:20 PM
RE: "Wake" - a Very High Quality Story - by doh - 09-23-2010, 04:49 PM
RE: "Wake" - a Very High Quality Story - by Akong - 09-24-2010, 04:50 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by Pandemoneus - 09-25-2010, 12:38 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by DamnNoHtml - 09-25-2010, 04:22 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by Placeable - 09-25-2010, 06:24 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by DamnNoHtml - 09-25-2010, 07:04 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by Bulbatron - 09-28-2010, 05:29 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by DamnNoHtml - 09-28-2010, 07:42 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by MulleDK19 - 09-28-2010, 09:25 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by nofsky - 09-28-2010, 09:11 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by DamnNoHtml - 09-28-2010, 09:20 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by DamnNoHtml - 09-28-2010, 10:50 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by MulleDK19 - 09-29-2010, 12:41 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by DamnNoHtml - 09-29-2010, 04:43 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by MulleDK19 - 09-30-2010, 05:46 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by DamnNoHtml - 09-30-2010, 07:04 PM
RE: "Wake" - Demo Uploaded - by Dark Knight - 09-30-2010, 09:42 PM
RE: "Wake" - Terrain Critiques Needed - by nofsky - 09-29-2010, 12:24 AM
RE: "Wake" - Terrain Critiques Needed - by anzki - 09-29-2010, 01:51 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by DamnNoHtml - 10-01-2010, 10:29 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Thomas - 10-02-2010, 01:21 AM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by DamnNoHtml - 10-02-2010, 01:24 AM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Alexander - 10-02-2010, 01:11 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by MulleDK19 - 10-02-2010, 02:18 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Alexander - 10-03-2010, 05:05 AM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Placeable - 10-02-2010, 04:05 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Gansher - 10-02-2010, 04:18 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by doh - 10-02-2010, 05:17 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Kein - 10-02-2010, 05:24 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by DamnNoHtml - 10-02-2010, 07:24 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Dark Knight - 10-02-2010, 07:41 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by DamnNoHtml - 10-02-2010, 07:44 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Dark Knight - 10-02-2010, 08:09 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by DamnNoHtml - 10-02-2010, 08:14 PM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by DamnNoHtml - 10-03-2010, 05:36 AM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Alexander - 10-03-2010, 05:37 AM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Youcef - 10-03-2010, 08:30 AM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by Som1Lse - 10-03-2010, 11:05 AM
RE: "Wake" - Beta 2 Released - by DamnNoHtml - 10-03-2010, 02:02 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by DamnNoHtml - 10-04-2010, 05:33 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Datashocker - 10-04-2010, 06:31 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Mephisto - 10-04-2010, 08:58 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by dbfuru - 10-04-2010, 09:23 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Alexander - 10-04-2010, 03:07 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by einfrnirdyr - 10-04-2010, 10:56 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by DamnNoHtml - 10-05-2010, 01:15 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Dark Knight - 10-05-2010, 07:10 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Mephisto - 10-05-2010, 10:24 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Gansher - 10-05-2010, 12:51 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Gansher - 10-05-2010, 07:35 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by JayEff - 11-03-2010, 10:05 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Nospheratu - 11-08-2010, 01:32 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by swumppih - 11-15-2010, 08:16 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by DamnNoHtml - 11-16-2010, 12:06 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Som1Lse - 11-16-2010, 06:06 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by swumppih - 11-16-2010, 08:24 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Yodake - 11-25-2010, 07:20 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Som1Lse - 11-25-2010, 08:48 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by PvtLastClass - 11-26-2010, 01:25 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by waqas12346 - 11-28-2010, 08:10 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Firia - 01-05-2011, 11:50 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by DIGI Byte - 01-05-2011, 09:33 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by house - 02-05-2011, 12:55 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Xss - 02-20-2011, 06:58 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Xss - 03-13-2011, 03:01 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by DamnNoHtml - 04-21-2011, 01:13 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Glouki - 04-08-2011, 08:57 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Xss - 04-22-2011, 01:44 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Hunter of Shadows - 04-22-2011, 11:51 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Hunter of Shadows - 05-18-2011, 06:00 AM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by SierenH - 12-18-2011, 08:37 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Mama Brijit - 01-05-2012, 11:58 PM
RE: "Wake" - Complete :) - by Vesanic - 02-21-2012, 04:48 PM



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