Lost In a Nightmare (Work in progress Alpha phase)

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@above:
tl;dr?

The story is pretty neat.

The map however has a few problems.

1. The chandelier is stretched making it look wrong.
   
2. There are simply too many torches.
   At least halve the number.
   
3. The billboards are too bright.
   My recommendation would be to set every billboards color.
   Try this:
   R: 0.15
   G: 0.2
   B: 0.2
   Also try to rotate them more randomly.
   
4. The pitch black areas look strange with all the lights in the room.
   You should place a box light to cover the whole room, and maybe also a point light in the middle of the room.
   
5. Also one of the doors crashed my game :p.
   

Other than that I am looking forward to this story.

And for the translation thingy:
I don't speak spanish. Maybe someone else here do, but if not you could always Google Translate it and then fix the obvious errors.