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Amnesia: An Unexpected Arrival [RELEASE] - v1.04
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video]

(03-31-2011 11:44 PM)Leu Radu Wrote:  You are merciless... and I like it. The Demo was too intense, I didn't not expect such a strong start. It shows your great potential. The mood is set perfectly by that dreadful music at the beginning. I see some good scripting work there. I'm quite curious of what you will conjure up in the final story!

There are some minor details that did not fit (besides the ones already discussed). I was able to see the monster spawn, appearing out of thin air. I believe you intend the player to enter the room, but I lingered outside, curios about the glass bottle and where it came from. Also, in the flooded hall, the water pouring out of the fountain has a sharp angle that looks totally unrealistic.

I believe the story is close to being finished, isn't it? I would gladly offer help in testing it, should you need it.

Thanks for the feedback, I have fixed the monster spawn and the fountain (amongst lots of other things!) I'm still playing around with the idea of having voice acting. Add my MSN: joenye@hotmail.co.uk if you would like to test the final story Smile

04-01-2011 05:23 PM
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RE: An Unexpected Arrival - A New Custom Story - Demo [+ Video] - Nye - 04-01-2011 05:23 PM
RE: An Unexpected Arrival - Released - Nye - 06-10-2011, 02:36 PM
RE: An Unexpected Arrival - Released - Nye - 06-10-2011, 08:37 PM
RE: An Unexpected Arrival - Released - Nye - 06-12-2011, 02:10 PM
RE: An Unexpected Arrival - Released - Nye - 06-13-2011, 07:28 PM
RE: An Unexpected Arrival - Released - Nye - 06-13-2011, 08:35 PM



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