Just passed the game. Took me about 30-40 minutes (So im guessing there is ALMOST about a hour full of gameplay. Unless your quick, which was me...kind of
) and i gotta say, nice storyline! If i had to rate it, I would rate it....mmm 7.8/10. Very well done, but some problems/negatives:
1.Couple of glitches. For instance, when you can jump off the (won't say, and i dont know how to use that spoiler tag -_- im a noob haha) it doesn't kill you, hence your stuck.
2.MAJOR GLITCH. I couldnt use my lantern after the "stairs event" again, i dont know how to use spoiler tags, sorry
) I dont know if you programmed the script to not let the player use the lantern or what...but i doubt it because there were still oil potions i could collect, but made me wonder, why is there even oil when i cant even use the lantern? Hopefully you can fix this glitch if possible.
3.There aren't any mementos? It would be nice if there were, but hey, this was your first map/custom story chapter so ill let it pass
4.Two blank notes. There were two (or three dont remember) blank notes. I dont know if you were going to delete the notes, but forgot to, or you meant to leave it empty or i dont know
5.One monster kept on getting stuck in a corner.
6.No music? I could help you add music if you wish. Unless you really did plan not to add any music to make everything scary, then that was well done. But music does make everything better....somewhat haha
Anyway, this custom story was good! Can't wait for chapter 2!