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Work in progress Ray Of Hope
GoDl1Kelol Offline
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#62
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED

Oh lawd, you're actually a guy. Anywho, I was only giving feedback on what I didn't see fit in there since it's still in beta, no need to bite my bloody head off and also the typos were in the item descriptions and so on. I was only saying if you're aiming this to be a serious story and all, the typos kind of ruin it. Not trying to be offensive in any way. Also for Louis' voice, use a northern European name and I wouldn't have an issue with it. He doesn't sound native English and therefor shouldn't have an English name. Gosh, I'd really sound like an arse if that's his real name. Anywho, good luck and what not.
Spoiler below!
And my jar issue was what to do with the finished jar, when I've put everything I have in it, there wasn't any info on that and it wouldn't let me use it at the corpses area.
08-27-2011, 07:20 PM
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Ray Of Hope - by Arvuti - 08-18-2011, 01:36 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-18-2011, 01:50 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Tenno - 08-18-2011, 07:53 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Kman - 08-18-2011, 09:02 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by HumiliatioN - 08-18-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by skypeskype - 08-18-2011, 09:21 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-18-2011, 01:46 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Arvuti - 08-18-2011, 03:14 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-19-2011, 03:21 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Ghostflame - 08-19-2011, 07:16 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-21-2011, 01:34 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-21-2011, 02:18 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-21-2011, 03:17 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by skypeskype - 08-21-2011, 08:55 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by MegaScience - 08-22-2011, 12:35 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by fuytko - 08-22-2011, 12:41 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Arvuti - 08-22-2011, 02:55 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Furix - 08-22-2011, 09:00 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Arvuti - 08-22-2011, 09:10 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-22-2011, 06:28 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by A Luna - 08-22-2011, 08:31 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Custom Story. - by Elven - 08-23-2011, 10:46 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-24-2011, 12:58 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Arvuti - 08-24-2011, 05:04 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-25-2011, 03:46 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-25-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by HumiliatioN - 08-25-2011, 03:47 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-25-2011, 04:05 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by HumiliatioN - 08-25-2011, 04:57 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-25-2011, 05:10 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by HumiliatioN - 08-26-2011, 01:12 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-26-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by HumiliatioN - 08-26-2011, 01:22 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-26-2011, 01:28 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by HumiliatioN - 08-26-2011, 04:29 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Tenno - 08-26-2011, 10:21 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-26-2011, 10:25 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Tenno - 08-26-2011, 10:28 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Your Computer - 08-26-2011, 11:04 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-26-2011, 06:19 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - [2 Teasers] - by Elven - 08-26-2011, 09:43 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-26-2011, 10:43 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-27-2011, 11:46 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Tenno - 08-27-2011, 12:36 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-27-2011, 01:30 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Tenno - 08-27-2011, 01:43 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-27-2011, 02:30 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by GoDl1Kelol - 08-27-2011, 03:33 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-27-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by GoDl1Kelol - 08-27-2011, 04:29 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-27-2011, 04:34 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by GoDl1Kelol - 08-27-2011, 04:54 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-27-2011, 04:56 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-27-2011, 05:51 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 08-27-2011, 06:57 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-27-2011, 06:58 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 08-27-2011, 07:00 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-27-2011, 07:07 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by GoDl1Kelol - 08-27-2011, 07:20 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-27-2011, 07:42 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by zeravia - 08-28-2011, 04:36 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-28-2011, 05:23 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-28-2011, 07:48 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Tenno - 08-28-2011, 08:27 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-28-2011, 08:34 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Acies - 08-28-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-28-2011, 08:23 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Acies - 08-28-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-28-2011, 09:08 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Acies - 08-28-2011, 09:33 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-28-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Dark Knight - 08-28-2011, 10:48 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-28-2011, 10:56 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Dark Knight - 08-28-2011, 11:09 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-28-2011, 11:13 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Dark Knight - 08-28-2011, 11:41 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Acies - 08-29-2011, 12:46 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-29-2011, 02:28 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Dark Knight - 08-29-2011, 08:48 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by plutomaniac - 08-29-2011, 02:37 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-29-2011, 02:38 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by plutomaniac - 08-29-2011, 02:44 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-29-2011, 02:45 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by plutomaniac - 08-29-2011, 02:50 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Acies - 08-29-2011, 04:03 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by TheKataKombs - 08-29-2011, 04:11 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-29-2011, 04:13 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by TheKataKombs - 08-29-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 04:14 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 04:16 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by TheKataKombs - 08-29-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 08-29-2011, 04:28 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 04:28 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 08-29-2011, 04:31 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 04:38 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by plutomaniac - 08-29-2011, 07:22 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 08:03 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Dark Knight - 08-29-2011, 09:06 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 09:19 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Dark Knight - 08-29-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by badfollower - 08-29-2011, 11:44 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-29-2011, 11:53 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by badfollower - 08-30-2011, 12:10 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-30-2011, 12:21 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-30-2011, 01:08 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 08-30-2011, 07:25 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-30-2011, 11:23 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 08-31-2011, 02:07 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 08-31-2011, 02:09 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by RawkBandMan - 09-02-2011, 05:41 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 09-02-2011, 06:29 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by RawkBandMan - 09-02-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 09-02-2011, 06:44 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Fetishman - 09-02-2011, 08:21 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 09-02-2011, 08:30 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 09-02-2011, 08:42 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 09-02-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 09-05-2011, 08:04 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 09-05-2011, 08:21 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 09-12-2011, 04:54 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by waqas12346 - 09-12-2011, 05:20 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 09-13-2011, 08:02 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 09-15-2011, 08:15 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 09-30-2011, 07:51 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Tanshaydar - 09-30-2011, 09:17 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by LawlPie - 10-04-2011, 06:25 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 10-04-2011, 06:38 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by LawlPie - 10-04-2011, 07:38 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-04-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-04-2011, 07:48 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by LawlPie - 10-04-2011, 09:27 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-04-2011, 09:55 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by LawlPie - 10-05-2011, 03:18 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 10-05-2011, 04:46 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by LawlPie - 10-05-2011, 06:27 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Eyvindr - 10-05-2011, 05:29 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-05-2011, 06:30 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-06-2011, 05:33 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by LawlPie - 10-06-2011, 09:10 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-14-2011, 01:59 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 10-14-2011, 02:04 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-14-2011, 02:22 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Kman - 10-14-2011, 11:43 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-14-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-16-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-18-2011, 04:11 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by lightmatt - 10-19-2011, 08:07 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Elven - 10-19-2011, 10:52 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by lightmatt - 10-19-2011, 04:10 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - by Arvuti - 10-26-2011, 01:29 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Teaser released. - by Alfieanne - 10-27-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - Teaser released. - by Arvuti - 10-30-2011, 02:03 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Arvuti - 11-04-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by WookieMang - 11-07-2011, 09:36 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Arvuti - 11-07-2011, 02:22 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by flamez3 - 11-08-2011, 03:55 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Arvuti - 11-11-2011, 07:18 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by BlueFury - 11-19-2011, 10:34 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Gunslingerjh - 01-11-2012, 05:34 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Giovanni Rosa - 11-16-2011, 10:35 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by dnb - 11-18-2011, 04:39 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Elven - 01-11-2012, 06:18 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Gunslingerjh - 01-12-2012, 12:01 AM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by ZraloK - 02-12-2012, 10:14 PM
RE: Ray Of Hope - by Kazakarumariou - 10-06-2012, 10:16 AM



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