[WIP] Ray Of Hope

[Tenno]

I'll answer some questions for you

Spoiler below!

1) How did you think about the beginning of story over all?
The beginning was good, had suspense, built up nicely, set the mood for the whole story.

2) Did you find the second key (on top of rock) yourself or with help?
I had to ask you about 2 or 3 times

3) Any 'scripted' problems you might have found?
Nope.

4) Any visual problems you might have found?
Overlapping textures/flickering walls.

5) What do you think about our voice actors. Please give our honest opinion as it is very important for us.
Not the best but as you said, you don't have access to the greatest voice actors. Not bad when compared to all the other custom stories with voice acting.

a) Was Louis voice acting convincing, was it enough emotional? Not really, lacked emotion sadly.

b) Was Our bad man in the one room badass (bad man voice) enough? Yes.

c) Was I good enough to be slave?
I don't understand, you voiced the slave?

d) Other comments? The voice acting could use improvement.

6) What did you think about intro?
Good scare to get the player in the mood for the darker nightmare to come.

7) What did you think about our second map ending? Did it scare you or you were dumb? Emotions?
The second map ended with the explosion right? Well that part scared the living hell out of me, then I was subjected to ear rape then killed by something while trying to find the closet in a panic

8) What about ending? Did you panic when monster appeared? Did you made it to the door? Did you think that you will get through door?
I knew that I wasn't going through that door, I could tell it was set up for a scare, so no real surprises.

9) What about the second map quest of combining?
I liked it, quite unique.

10) What did you think about our third map? What did you think when you entered every time into new room?
The third map looked like a demon had destroyed all the rooms, my first thought when I entered each room was: I am about to die.

11) What is your thoughts about future of the story? Just predictions and stuff ?
I predict that the story will become much better once certain issues have been addressed and it is continued.

12) Any other comments? Keep working on this

Hope this helps.