ANY ADVICE NEEDED

[Ka1ben]

Hey, guys! I'd love for you to take a look at this and give me any advice that you can give me.

As a personal request from me, at least see part 2 before making your judgement. Thank you!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kvygEptf6M0

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[Lucke]

I'd recommend speeding up or even editing out some parts when you're trying to think of what to do. It lets you fit a lot more interesting gameplay into one video.

That's all I can really point out.