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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
Kullin Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-24-2013, 10:37 AM)Pshyched Wrote: There is light dust there, Haha. Light Dust-Large to be exact.
Oh i saw it now, but have it in the Bilboard, now its over and look weird Wink
05-24-2013, 11:26 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I see what you mean, I moved them into the Bilboards, looks a lot better now. btw Is there a way to change the angle of which they fall?
05-24-2013, 11:37 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-24-2013, 11:37 AM)Pshyched Wrote: I see what you mean, I moved them into the Bilboards, looks a lot better now. btw Is there a way to change the angle of which they fall?

You have to edit the .ps file.

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05-24-2013, 11:53 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-24-2013, 11:37 AM)Pshyched Wrote: I see what you mean, I moved them into the Bilboards, looks a lot better now. btw Is there a way to change the angle of which they fall?

You could rotate them in the Level editor as well, but they still move in the same way, just in a different direction from the center. Smile

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05-24-2013, 12:00 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

still needs a lot of work but fuck it #yolo
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EDIT: updated first screenshot after an hour or two more of work, it's pretty much done at this point

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05-25-2013, 10:34 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Looks good, about the first screen. Turn on your shadows for your spotlight, you did it for your 2nd picture, but not the first?
05-25-2013, 04:16 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I've been playing around, adding more and adding less, to try and make it as good as I can. Here's what I feel is a final Product, I hope its good. Smile
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05-25-2013, 07:02 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

@Physhced - I think the candle can be rotated, so the pointlight it has is being cast into the room. Not the wall.

The room should have a very dark box-light because of the candlelight + window light.

The window tint is to green, like your under-water or something.
05-25-2013, 11:58 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-25-2013, 07:02 PM)Pshyched Wrote: I've been playing around, adding more and adding less, to try and make it as good as I can. Here's what I feel is a final Product, I hope its good. Smile
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Excuse me good sir, but I have to ask:
Spoiler below!

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What is this nonsense?
You know exactly how to use a boxlight, I've seen them in your maps before. For this room, I'd recommend going with a darker and less saturated version of the colour you end up using for the window light.

Darker - divide all the numbers in half... probably in thirds (divide by 3) based on the brightness of your window currently

Saturation - make all the numbers closer together so it appears more grey, but isn't actually grey <~ key part of the sentence


On the flip side, I like the colours you used together. They may not be appropriate for a window (as pointed out by Rapture), but they look good together and your use of pointlights is improving!

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05-26-2013, 01:27 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(05-25-2013, 11:58 PM)Rapture Wrote: @Physhced - I think the candle can be rotated, so the pointlight it has is being cast into the room. Not the wall.

The room should have a very dark box-light because of the candlelight + window light.

The window tint is to green, like your under-water or something.

I did not even realise candles had pointlights already attached to them -.- Thank you for telling me this! Big Grin

Yes, I will be adding a box light to these rooms, The same as i did with my Demo map.

I sorta liked the effect though :/ But I guess I could try and make it more of a lighter colour (But its actually Teal color Tongue)

Kiandra, I dont know why But I can't actually see those images Sad

I'll play around with the colors and try to get a good combo Smile
05-26-2013, 09:21 AM
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