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Dark Deeds (Temporary Name)
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Fralexxelarf Offline
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Dark Deeds (Temporary Name)

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Quote:This is just one room, I just want some feedback before I start on my next one, there's really no story yet.
Keep in mind that this is my first map Smile

http://www.mediafire.com/?z3s567opuo35hrv

Here's my updated version: http://www.mediafire.com/?8l9i7awa52yyyl5

Note!
1. I know that the notes dont say anything, YET. I have written most of them but I don't want to tell you an unfinished story.
2. Once I've made a couple more maps the story will enter closed beta.
3. Nothing is complete yet.
(This post was last modified: 01-07-2012 12:02 PM by Fralexxelarf.)
01-01-2012 09:40 PM
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

Decided to try it, and for a first map this is really well done. Level design was simple, albeit, but with some practice, you'll get far better.
Spoiler below!
The scare with the flying teleporting naked man coming out of the wardrobe was great. Took me by surprise, even after binging on PewDiePie videos.

Other than the little problems, like a bit of poke-through on the walls, this is a good start to mapping as you seem to have some experience with scripting. Keep it up! Big Grin
01-01-2012 10:15 PM
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Fralexxelarf Offline
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

thanks! Smile
01-01-2012 10:33 PM
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

!SPOILER! I got scared shitless from that man in the closet! Damn good Big Grin
That was a beast scare Big Grin

Current Project: Depths of Shadows(Mapper)
01-02-2012 08:27 PM
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!

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01-02-2012 08:54 PM
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

(01-02-2012 08:54 PM)thetury455 Wrote:  ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!


ThanksSmile , I have fixed note texts and keys, the crowbar has been removed, there's a key inside the chest in the room with the arms, but it got invisible as the chest mesh is bad, fixed now. And I've added another 2 rooms.
(This post was last modified: 01-03-2012 02:31 PM by Fralexxelarf.)
01-03-2012 02:25 PM
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

(01-03-2012 02:25 PM)Fralexxelarf Wrote:  
(01-02-2012 08:54 PM)thetury455 Wrote:  ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!


ThanksSmile , I have fixed note texts and keys, the crowbar has been removed, there's a key inside the chest in the room with the arms, but it got invisible as the chest mesh is bad, fixed now. And I've added another 2 rooms.
its gonna be great im looking forword to it Big Grin

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01-03-2012 03:41 PM
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Quotentote Offline
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

naked guy scared the shit out of me too :<

i found 2 small things:

1st: the first time i died (YES I DID xD) and spawned in the first room. but the door was locked :/
2nd: the 2nd machineroom key (btw both have the same name/description) is bugged in that chest. you cant see, but pick up.

keep on!

greetings
01-04-2012 05:48 AM
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Fralexxelarf Offline
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RE: My little project, need feedback :D

(01-04-2012 05:48 AM)Quotentote Wrote:  naked guy scared the shit out of me too :<

i found 2 small things:

1st: the first time i died (YES I DID xD) and spawned in the first room. but the door was locked :/
2nd: the 2nd machineroom key (btw both have the same name/description) is bugged in that chest. you cant see, but pick up.

keep on!

greetings

Thanks for dying xD cause i forgot to unlock the door after you have died.
Everything Else is fixed, ans I'm going to upload the fixed version as soon as i get homeSmile
01-04-2012 07:05 PM
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RE: My little project - Updated

thread updated
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01-06-2012 10:38 PM
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