ScaryHouse

[SpliTzoR]

Hey!
This is my first custom story that i made on a week because it was my first and i didn't work on it so much.
Much thanks to my mate rallelol try hes maps : Mysko and Big P's House try them!

Remember this is my first and a really short map!
it's not so good but try it


Download link: http://speedy.sh/xsqQp/ScaryHouse.rar
Download link2: http://www.mediafire.com/?y9y1xf5c43p2dbn
There you go!
I'll hope you enjoy my custom story.

Some pic:

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/694...house.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/215...ouse1.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/836...ouse2.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/651...ouse3.png/


Try my second map: Fear Night

Thanks!

By:SpliTzoR

[ThePatoAS]

Can you put a link in mediafire? c:

[SpliTzoR]

(02-29-2012 08:00 PM)ThePatoAS Wrote:  Can you put a link in mediafire? c:

Ye ofc

[ThePatoAS]

(02-29-2012 08:01 PM)SpliTzoR Wrote:  

(02-29-2012 08:00 PM)ThePatoAS Wrote:  Can you put a link in mediafire? c:

Ye ofc

Thanks i'll try it


I You are gonna play this don't read this

Spoiler below!

So.. i played your story and just by the name i thinked that it will have a lot of scary JumpScare but you surprised me...
Normally they make JumpScare map with Teleporting Naked Guys BUT you used monsters...

you didn't scared me too much... just with that brute coming out of the dresser...
In this story there are too much dresser and Statues... But TOO MANY KEYS!
You could use a Crowbar a Hollow Needle Hammer Chiller etc...
including in the story there where keys called ''Room Key2'' and ''Door Key3'' but there weren't a Door Key2 and a Door Key

That Teleporting Naked Guy jumped too slow and it didn't screamed

The Keys were like ALWAYS In the same place
(1st Key=Dresser)
2nd Key=Dresser
3rd Key=Dresser
4 Key= well that was in a Display...
5 Key= Dresser
6 Key=Iron Maiden
7 Key=top of the bed)

i founded the keys in seconds they were in very recurrent places...

i found a bad weird that i was in a castle and then suddendly a room with an iron maiden

Well it wasn't bad for being your first custom Story i would give it a... 5/10

Some JumpScares were good, mapping was a bit repeated from other rooms

[SpliTzoR]

(02-29-2012 08:40 PM)ThePatoAS Wrote:  

(02-29-2012 08:01 PM)SpliTzoR Wrote:  

(02-29-2012 08:00 PM)ThePatoAS Wrote:  Can you put a link in mediafire? c:

Ye ofc

Thanks i'll try it


I You are gonna play this don't read this

Spoiler below!

So.. i played your story and just by the name i thinked that it will have a lot of scary JumpScare but you surprised me...
Normally they make JumpScare map with Teleporting Naked Guys BUT you used monsters...

you didn't scared me too much... just with that brute coming out of the dresser...
In this story there are too much dresser and Statues... But TOO MANY KEYS!
You could use a Crowbar a Hollow Needle Hammer Chiller etc...
including in the story there where keys called ''Room Key2'' and ''Door Key3'' but there weren't a Door Key2 and a Door Key

That Teleporting Naked Guy jumped too slow and it didn't screamed

The Keys were like ALWAYS In the same place
(1st Key=Dresser)
2nd Key=Dresser
3rd Key=Dresser
4 Key= well that was in a Display...
5 Key= Dresser
6 Key=Iron Maiden
7 Key=top of the bed)

i founded the keys in seconds they were in very recurrent places...

i found a bad weird that i was in a castle and then suddendly a room with an iron maiden

Well it wasn't bad for being your first custom Story i would give it a... 5/10

Some JumpScares were good, mapping was a bit repeated from other rooms

Okey Thanks!

[Xanthos]

I'd say put more info in the desc, other than that It sure looks like a really good first map!

[SpliTzoR]

(03-04-2012 11:37 PM)Xanthos Wrote:  I'd say put more info in the desc, other than that It sure looks like a really good first map!

thanks.
I just started with my second map and i will put more in desc and that and it will be muuuch bigger

//Splitzor

[Xanthos]

(03-07-2012 01:26 PM)SpliTzoR Wrote:  

(03-04-2012 11:37 PM)Xanthos Wrote:  I'd say put more info in the desc, other than that It sure looks like a really good first map!

thanks.
I just started with my second map and i will put more in desc and that and it will be muuuch bigger

//Splitzor

Awesome! I might give it a try.
I'm working on my second map too!
Adding custom sounds

[Trollardo]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAMEKcO7Y-I Part 1!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_LwyV7KtCqI Part 2!

Awesome custom story, had fun playing it!

[BlackMuffin]

(03-11-2012 01:02 PM)Trollardo Wrote:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAMEKcO7Y-I Part 1!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_LwyV7KtCqI Part 2!

Awesome custom story, had fun playing it!

Subscribed to you. OwO

But to be on-topic now...
@OP I really want to try the story now that I saw Trollardo's LP. Trust me, I'll be just as terrified as if it were blind. I expect to lose complete control of my bowels soon.