Update on my first official story, but need feedback and help

[The Rock Worm]

Check this out,
Might help LOTS of new ppl!
http://frictionalgames.com/forum/thread-7085.html
CLICK THE SPOILER BELOW!!!
IF u needed this....
Lange.
-NOCTURNAL CONFUSION-

Thank you! That will be extremely helpful in level creation! Being able to understand the various functions certainly affects how well one makes a game. Thanks my friend