[WIP] First "Real" Custom Story, Need some testers! [Update 0.3]

[Cetex1337]

Hello guys this is Cetex.

I'm looking for some tester for my map, it is my first custom story i have put sweat and blood in. It's not a "Advanced Map" but i think i did good with the scripting. I need some feedback from you guys to what i could add or remove.

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Custom Story Name: Not set yet.
Time Used: Approximately 5 days
Length: 5-8 minutes
Storyline: None
Rooms: 2/4 done and ready to use
Made by: Cetex (With guidance from Chronogyros, Traggey, andyrockin123, Apjjm and JMFStorm)

You can download the map from my Dropbox here:

- http://dl.dropbox.com/u/50154004/Cetex.rar (Version 0.1 20-Jun-2012)
- http://dl.dropbox.com/u/50154004/Cetex02.rar (Version 0.2 21-Jun-2012: Fixes: Sewers is now repeatable, a key instead of dagger, well instead of doors in the sewers, added prison door for the dungeon section, fixed some bugs with the scripts)
- http://dl.dropbox.com/u/50154004/Cetex03.rar (Version 0.3 21-Jun-2012: Fixes: Added room 3 aka Dungeon only 1 room to go, fixed a bloodsplater bug with some specific keyboards and a crash fix.)

I wish you guys a nice day and i will wait for some feedback, i will try to respond to all the comments.

[The Shanus]

(06-21-2012 01:14 PM)Cetex1337 Wrote:  Hello guys this is Cetex.

I'm looking for some tester for my map, it is my first custom story i have put sweat and blood in. It's not a "Advanced Map" but i think i did good with the scripting. I need some feedback from you guys to what i could add or remove.

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Custom Story Name: Not set yet.
Time Used: Approximately 3 days
Length: 5-8 minutes
Storyline: None
Rooms: 2/4 done and ready to use
Made by: Cetex (With guidance from Chronogyros, Traggey, andyrockin123, Apjjm and JMFStorm)

You can download the map from my Dropbox here: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/50154004/Cetex.rar
Virus Scan: https://www.virustotal.com/file/a3625820...340281096/

I wish you guys a nice day and i will wait for some feedback, i will try to respond to all the comments.

Guess we both posted for test requests at the same time!
I've got a problem:

I can't get out of the first room. Could you pm me? I hope it's not through my ignorance that I didn't find a key, but please - PM me :}

[Cetex1337]

(06-21-2012 01:22 PM)The Shanus Wrote:  

(06-21-2012 01:14 PM)Cetex1337 Wrote:  Hello guys this is Cetex.

I'm looking for some tester for my map, it is my first custom story i have put sweat and blood in. It's not a "Advanced Map" but i think i did good with the scripting. I need some feedback from you guys to what i could add or remove.

Code: (Select All)

Custom Story Name: Not set yet.
Time Used: Approximately 3 days
Length: 5-8 minutes
Storyline: None
Rooms: 2/4 done and ready to use
Made by: Cetex (With guidance from Chronogyros, Traggey, andyrockin123, Apjjm and JMFStorm)

You can download the map from my Dropbox here: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/50154004/Cetex.rar
Virus Scan: https://www.virustotal.com/file/a3625820...340281096/

I wish you guys a nice day and i will wait for some feedback, i will try to respond to all the comments.

Guess we both posted for test requests at the same time!
I've got a problem:

I can't get out of the first room. Could you pm me? I hope it's not through my ignorance that I didn't find a key, but please - PM me :}

Pm'd, i'll have a look at yours too

[The Shanus]

Okay, so the beginning was great. First question came about with the loading, I don't think you need to put so many level doors straight away. Especially as you go down a ladder and come out of a door Aside from that, there was a crash! As I tried to go through the loading door after the water part, the game crashed :[ Let me know when you fix that, and I'll play the rest.

[Cetex1337]

(06-21-2012 01:32 PM)The Shanus Wrote:  Okay, so the beginning was great. First question came about with the loading, I don't think you need to put so many level doors straight away. Especially as you go down a ladder and come out of a door Aside from that, there was a crash! As I tried to go through the loading door after the water part, the game crashed :[ Let me know when you fix that, and I'll play the rest.

The 3 door part is as it should be, after the water part then go back to where you came from. I think it's your computer that had a minor crash not the map. You'll unlock the 2 other locked doors and if you open them to their next level, then you will receive a crash since i haven't made that yet.

So you should be able to return to the main room and the water part as much as you like.

[The Shanus]

(06-21-2012 01:49 PM)Cetex1337 Wrote:  

(06-21-2012 01:32 PM)The Shanus Wrote:  Okay, so the beginning was great. First question came about with the loading, I don't think you need to put so many level doors straight away. Especially as you go down a ladder and come out of a door Aside from that, there was a crash! As I tried to go through the loading door after the water part, the game crashed :[ Let me know when you fix that, and I'll play the rest.

The 3 door part is as it should be, after the water part then go back to where you came from. I think it's your computer that had a minor crash not the map. You'll unlock the 2 other locked doors and if you open them to their next level, then you will receive a crash since i haven't made that yet.

So you should be able to return to the main room and the water part as much as you like.

After coming back from the water part, I unlocked the door on the right, facing away from the ladder, with the hollow needle. I couldnt unlock the one on the left. I then tried to enter through that loading door, but it crashed? Other than that, I just think after you go down the ladder, you should have another ladder instead of a door, because it doesnt really make sense?

[tratolak]

Worked fine, but there was still something strange..
1. The lantern oil is full on start
2. The door break in the water monster part was kinda strange
3. The level change between level 1 and sewers isnt repeatable

That were the only things that seemed strange to me

[Cetex1337]

(06-21-2012 02:13 PM)tratolak Wrote:  Worked fine, but there was still something strange..
1. The lantern oil is full on start
2. The door break in the water monster part was kinda strange
3. The level change between level 1 and sewers isnt repeatable

That were the only things that seemed strange to me

Will fix number 3 + 2.

Will think about number 1.

[The Shanus]

Now it crashes upon going down the ladder, but it comes up with BugSplat instead of just an alert box.

[Stepper321]

You don't think about Number 1. You do it. You never should have a lantern that is full. Always put it around 60/80 or 0/30