Unnamed Story - [WIP]

[Gamemakingdude]

This is my first story and i've spent 3 days on it so far.

Screenie 1:
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Screenie 2:

Screenie 3:

Basically the storyline is to try and escape from the place without going insane (of course)


Suggestions are welcome to add to the story/map.
I'm also gonna try to add more detail


The following things i need help are:

Levers
An item colliding with an enemy (an enemy can disappear with this item colliding with them)
Decals (like for the windows.)

[Tottel]

EDIT: You've edited your main post, no need for me to give away spoilers now ^^

Looking forward to more pics. You should add some more detail to your scenes, but that top one looks quite ok already. The chandeliers are weirdly placed though.
Maybe a tip: Think of the purposes of the rooms first. I'm not sure what this is, it looks somewhat like a dining room, combined with some others.

[Gamemakingdude]

I guess i should edit this...

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(11-10-2010 12:54 AM)Tottel Wrote:  EDIT: You've edited your main post, no need for me to give away spoilers now ^^

Looking forward to more pics. You should add some more detail to your scenes, but that top one looks quite ok already. The chandeliers are weirdly placed though.
Maybe a tip: Think of the purposes of the rooms first. I'm not sure what this is, it looks somewhat like a dining room, combined with some others.

Thanks for suggestions sure will add more detail and i'll see if i can fix the chandelier.

[Gamemakingdude]

Screenie 2 update
Added more eye candy
I hope its an improvement



Where is the dungeon related stuff and maybe dust piles or that stuff i see in amensia what's that enitity called?