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First Map - Stalking WIP
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Austums Offline
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First Map - Stalking WIP

"You are sound asleep when, suddenly, a horrible scream echoes throughout the halls of your family's manor."

I'm pretty excited about the story I have for this map, unfortunately I am still very new to HPL as I only started using the level editor last night, and I have absolutely no idea on how to script :/

Anyways, I hope to get scripting down with the help of this forum; I have some really cool ideas I'd love to share with everyone.

Here are some pictures of my story, as well as the link for the story itself. It's only two room and a hallway, but I figured I'd let you guys critique it and tell me how you think I could improve! Thanks!
And the download link:


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(This post was last modified: 03-23-2011 02:40 AM by Austums.)
03-23-2011 02:38 AM
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RE: First Map - Stalking WIP

Could be interesting to play a story where other people are in close proximity (though I assume you won't be interacting with them directly), haven't seen much of that yet. Also there's a grammatical error on that note, "Followed" would not be capitalized.
03-23-2011 04:20 AM
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Austums Offline
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RE: First Map - Stalking WIP

Ahh, you are right. Nice catch!

I think I'm going for more of a cat and mouse type story, which should hopefully be very intense!
03-23-2011 04:49 AM
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