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The great out doors [Custom story] FINISHED
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aidan499 Offline
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The great out doors [Custom story] FINISHED

http://www.mediafire.com/?xwagggagw752ahi
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Dowload it above ^^^^^^^
or below
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http://www.mediafire.com/?xwagggagw752ahi
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Please Reply To give me more ideas
and say how scarey it was!
[---------FINISHED!---------]
[-----------------yay !-------- ]
[------------------HAPPIE DIE!!-------]


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(This post was last modified: 05-02-2011 09:51 AM by aidan499.)
05-01-2011 03:47 PM
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Kyle Offline
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RE: The great out doors beta [Custom story]

I'm trying it right now...

05-01-2011 04:09 PM
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RE: The great out doors beta [Custom story]

(05-01-2011 04:09 PM)Kyle Wrote:  I'm trying it right now...

Same here and there is not any script :/

Just 3 maps well lets try Tongue

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05-01-2011 04:11 PM
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RE: The great out doors beta [Custom story]

If I might ask, how old are you? If you don't want to answer, that is your choice.

Now about that custom story. It didn't seem scary, there were no scripts, like HumiliatioN said. The monster at the beginning was glitched, I believe you made all the grass collidable so you couldn't walk on it. No music. Overlapping walls. The second house was very awkward, there were overlapping walls and holes in the sides of the floor. And it took me around a minute to get the hatch door open. If this is your first custom story, you did a good job I guess because you tried.

05-01-2011 04:22 PM
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RE: The great out doors beta [Custom story]

Umm.. this map takes time to play few minutes... Too short.. and let me start your mistakes and negative sides on your first map.. Too many but it was ok for your first job.

First: The lighting was bad, first zombie outside was glitched and dummy spot to catch you.

Second: So many texture errors with walls and floors and that outside needs improvement, useless string and other items because you have lantern full of oil at begin.. then you have Oils, sanity potions its just not good for a scary and good custom story.

Third: There is no story at all no scripting whatsoever. Only description was nice at begin.

Okay dont be mad i just teach you to get some understand why this map is so bad Smile But you are beginner like i am sort of..

Fix these on your full release or next upcoming project Smile

Thanks anyway !

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05-01-2011 05:02 PM
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RE: The great out doors betav2 [Custom story]

[---------New Version!---------]
[-----------------yay !-------- ]
[------------------NEW MAP!-------]
(05-01-2011 04:22 PM)Kyle Wrote:  If I might ask, how old are you? If you don't want to answer, that is your choice.

Now about that custom story. It didn't seem scary, there were no scripts, like HumiliatioN said. The monster at the beginning was glitched, I believe you made all the grass collidable so you couldn't walk on it. No music. Overlapping walls. The second house was very awkward, there were overlapping walls and holes in the sides of the floor. And it took me around a minute to get the hatch door open. If this is your first custom story, you did a good job I guess because you tried.

I am now 23 year old nearly 24
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05-01-2011 05:51 PM
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Kyle Offline
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RE: The great out doors betav2 [Custom story]

(05-01-2011 05:51 PM)aidan499 Wrote:  I am now 23 year old nearly 24

Sorry to say this, but I'm only 13 and I nearly mastered custom story making.

05-01-2011 09:39 PM
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RE: The great out doors beta [Custom story]

Err, this isn't an e-peen competition now...don't be hatin on other people. Sad
05-01-2011 09:43 PM
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Kyle Offline
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RE: The great out doors beta [Custom story]

(05-01-2011 09:43 PM)MrBigzy Wrote:  Err, this isn't an e-peen competition now...don't be hatin on other people. Sad

No hating on people that are of who are being hated on from the person hating on whoever.

05-01-2011 09:50 PM
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