my custom story:Screams (unfinished beta)

[HeyCuttie]

this is my first custom story using hpl2 engine, i dont have any past experience with scripting and making maps so i think its my first time i made a map on my whole life test it

link: https://rapidshare.com/files/461888757/Screams.rar

[bobbo]

Thanks for sharing, I'll try it now!

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Oh, that was quick... I wouldn't call this a "story" yet - it's just four rooms and nothing happens in them. Also in these rooms there are some lightning and texture problems, but I'm too much of a noob to comment on them, maybe some of the pros here know advice for you!

[HeyCuttie]

(05-11-2011 01:14 PM)bobbo Wrote:  Thanks for sharing, I'll try it now!

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Oh, that was quick... I wouldn't call this a "story" yet - it's just four rooms and nothing happens in them. Also in these rooms there are some lightning and texture problems, but I'm too much of a noob to comment on them, maybe some of the pros here know advice for you!

i forgot to say its unfinished and it has major bugs and glitches. but thanks for the feedback im going to make more. and i need some help of someguys here. how can i make a door that leads to a new level like in the game you click on the door and it loads the entrance hall.i cant find it out and im still trying to understand the scripting and how it works, my dad showed me basic c++ when i was a kiddo,now its the time where i need him to learn me c++

[Khyrpa]

Oh okay.. first of all why did you include all maps from original storys chapter 1?
Then yeah there was no idea at all in playing through that, perhaps wait until you have some actual gameplay or need for feedback. And yeah, try to examine other maps to get some idea about how the maps are built or something

[Dark Knight]

(05-11-2011 12:58 PM)HeyCuttie Wrote:  link: https://rapidshare.com/files/461888757/Screams.rar

well, it has some bugs, sorry

after walking this door, i fall and died, whatta?




that door was real fun

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and please add music, make smaller rooms, and some fucking grunts.

[HeyCuttie]

(05-12-2011 07:29 PM)Dark Knight Wrote:  

(05-11-2011 12:58 PM)HeyCuttie Wrote:  link: https://rapidshare.com/files/461888757/Screams.rar

well, it has some bugs, sorry

after walking this door, i fall and died, whatta?




that door was real fun

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and please add music, make smaller rooms, and some fucking grunts.

i made a better one still havent got a sotry in it but i can give it to you and all here the link is https://rapidshare.com/files/3386637015/...rvival.rar the 3rd level its not finished yet pls i need feedback so i can know where are glitches and stuff and what should i do. and make a story if you can because im wroking on making a story based on that map.

[HeyCuttie]

update i made a new survival map, its not done but ill add pathnodes to the grunt soon

[Dark Knight]

(05-14-2011 12:36 PM)HeyCuttie Wrote:  i made a better one still havent got a sotry in it but i can give it to you and all here the link is https://rapidshare.com/files/3386637015/...rvival.rar the 3rd level its not finished yet pls i need feedback so i can know where are glitches and stuff and what should i do. and make a story if you can because im wroking on making a story based on that map.

well, nice,

but please dont use rapidshare, that really sucks!

so, environment very nice, but when i enters that door back to main hall,

(on the right corner of screen)

game crashes to desktop

[HeyCuttie]

(05-14-2011 06:31 PM)Dark Knight Wrote:  

(05-14-2011 12:36 PM)HeyCuttie Wrote:  i made a better one still havent got a sotry in it but i can give it to you and all here the link is https://rapidshare.com/files/3386637015/...rvival.rar the 3rd level its not finished yet pls i need feedback so i can know where are glitches and stuff and what should i do. and make a story if you can because im wroking on making a story based on that map.

well, nice,

but please dont use rapidshare, that really sucks!

so, environment very nice, but when i enters that door back to main hall,

(on the right corner of screen)

game crashes to desktop

i know i fixed ALL OF THEM!!! and added the 3rd level i can send you link its rapidshare sorry man but my dad has a rapidshare pro pls say me another place to upload that is free link:https://rapidshare.com/files/526203561/Cutie_Survival.rar also when you enter the last door it gets you back at the second level because its unfinished i made a story about it. you are one of the regular workers at making the tunnel that Alexander told you. you wake up tomorrow and everyone is gone and there's a note left by one of the workers that kept it personal for him.it explains somethings. but pls say me how i can make my note to work i cant figure it out . im at the 4th level making it now